god, this was so twisted, but still incredible. Written very well; as i like this style of writing, yet many can't get it quite right.

oh man, now i really wanna know how axel reacts! is there a sequel? probably not. thanks for the fic, aw, i feel bad for axel having to walk into that. and poor roxas having been drugged with herds and what not from marluxia, but i did enjoy reading this fic! kkeep writing! thanksyou!QQ

Wow. That was...pretty messed up.

But really, really well written. Mar was just so...evil. It was perfect. >D

Marly so evil and twisted. >:)

Damn thats hot. My third fav pairing, too. [ya,i'm weird]

:] I love you.

Surprisingly, I've never read anything close to Marluxia/Roxas before. This was dangerously enticing with such a teasing, teasing ending. Your writing style is quite pretty, as well. It flows and trails where it's supposed to. :]

OH! That's brilliant! I felt some-what villianous reading this X3 Very well written! Keep writing!

You are an amazing person.

And that, ladies and gentlemen, is the way that Marluxia was created to be portrayed. Arrogant elegance and poisonous to the touch. Absolutely delightful.

i love this. please make morew o.o

Dub-con with Marluxia?

I just woke up an hour ago, and you've already made my day. Thank you.

o-o oh NOEZ! BAD MARLY, BAD! That's AXEL'S Roxy you're fucking with! (literally o.O) Oh I can just TELL this is going to be good (if you continue it, are you?) mostly because it already is. >w

So deliciously immoral, that Marluxia. Very good and hot fic.

Not bad. Not bad at all. In fact, damn good. I liked it. I liked it a lot. I like the rhythm of it. Quite a lyrical feel to it that kept me reading till the end.

Good luck in any and every future writing!

~Rubyfruit Pixie~

I hate your Marluxia so much. :D That sick bastard.