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Reviews For: Five Minutes

SallyJetson 2007-10-01 ch 1,	abuseOh how could I have missed this one! Just the right mix of trepidation, humor and sweetness while anticipating the results from the pee on the stick. sigh
notesofwimsey 2007-07-31 ch 1,	abuse“Yeah, well, you’re the one who insisted on doing it in all those weird positions because of some crazy Italian old wives tales.” Again, you do a great job of breaking up the tension and drama with jokes and humour, but they always fit the characters so well. I could hear them teasing each other and trying to make each other laugh, but underlying it all was the solid commitment. The Wyoming line was another snort!
JennCorinthos 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abuseThis was too cute and so them... Loved it... JENNIFER
mabelreid 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abuseLove these lines, so funny and sweet “I mean, if it’s positive, then that means all of our hard work paid off. And if it’s negative, well, damn, I just have to keep makin’ love to you. It’s a sacrifice, but take one for the team, that’s my motto,” he teased her. “Hey, we have a girl and she looks anything like you, Montana? She ain’t allowed out of the house until she’s at least thirty-five.” “I wasn’t mean. I was just – Ya know, it was just a kind of initiation rite.” “Hmm. Right. Sure. Telling me to call Mac ‘sir.’ ” “Oh, c’mon, looking back, it’s kinda funny, right?” In spite of herself, she shrugged, giving just a little. “It was like me pulling your pigtails,” he pointed out. At that she laughed. “You’re such a boy, Messer.” “Yeah, well, you’re the one who insisted on doing it in all those weird positions because of some crazy Italian old wives tales.” “I didn’t hear you complainin’ at the time, Montana.” “God really has a twisted sense of humour.” Danny felt his heart sink. He walked over and wrapped his arms around his wife from behind. “It’s okay, Linds. We’ll just keep trying. Next time –” “No, I mean – I mean, uh, He’s actually letting us become parents,” she announced, seemingly in utter shock. She held up the test for him to see. Sure enough, there in the window was a clear, pink plus sign. Lovely fluff, thanks for sharing.
chili-peppers 2007-07-24 ch 1,	abuseOh wow! That was so beautiful and cute! I loved it! Brilliant work :D
DAnNSfreak 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuseGotta love DL stories. This one really brightened up my day. Great job!
RockinLizzy 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseAwh, another sweet story. I love it. You really do have their voices spot on. :D
johnteylafan 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseSuch a cute story...I love their banter... It was both funny and sweet...and loving... Thanks for sharing
TBD 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseGreat job. I just read both your fics and they are very very sweet and wonderful fluff :) Hope you write more!
GRACE5 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abusetotally loved it! great job.
CCWaT 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseWow... Beautiful Fic, I like it very much :) Please write soon more! A sequel to this would also be great. I like D/L Fics =)
ReJo 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseThese parts were hilarious: “I mean, if it’s positive, then that means all of our hard work paid off. And if it’s negative, well, damn, I just have to keep makin’ love to you. It’s a sacrifice, but take one for the team, that’s my motto,” he teased her. a “When did it happen for you?” “When what?” “Ya know, when you knew you liked me and had to have me.” “I’m still waiting,” she deadpanned. “Funny, Montana. Real cute.” a I like the subtlety of this part, knowing what the pool table represents: Her eyes moved over his shoulder, over to the pool table and she could not help the smile that crossed her lips.
daytimedrama 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abusewow so adorable. I love their playful banter! Your oneshots are excellent! more more!

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