i like it

Very nicely done. Really captured the characters. I love your writing style, and your good grammar. Thanks!

Oh really?

loved reading Edwards thoughts after the return from Italy. xx

I didn't know you had written so much! 99 stories. I like this one. Interesting and realistic take.

Karma is a bitch, right Edward? As much as I love Twilight, it just made me so angry when Edward arrogantly decided to leave Bella for her own good. Who died and made him God? Lucky for him it turned out as well as it did, so I could continue to read the series. Anyway, you had a good take on this part and I enjoyed reading it.

SusayyQ is on a quest to read all of ur twilight stories

BTW THIS WAS SOO SWEET I LOVE EDWARDS MIND

That was awesome

I could most certainly see this happening in the book. Wonderful job.

arf... my por Edward... so tortured by al the implications of his acts... he thought everything would be fine for Bella, because she's a human... but nothing good came for that split, for neither of them...

and jacob... nice try... lol...

love that OS...

thanks again... _

nice

WONDERFUL, YOU DID IT AGAIN, AN AMAZING CLIFF HANGER. WAITING, DROOLING.

I love Jacob/Edward confrontations!

I enjoyed reading from Edward's POV and his thoughts on what happened in the end of New Moon..just wish it could have been longer...

Really beautiful! I like it!

Thanks!