Maybe add in some Takuya x Mimi? Or make it so he gets some spotlight? :)

This story I seems kind of bias towards darkness as a whole in my opinion then again Hiraki is bias against darkness as a whole. How did Duskmon know about other dimension anyway Light also have it bad points just as darkness does. The light blinds people sometimes especially the sun when you look directly at it. Not all dark digimon are bad and some of them even aid the main character in Digimon World Dusk game the protagonist Tamers of that game even tamed Digimon of darkness though they are not evil either. but that did not make them evil either. Also why is Duskmon the only bad guy in the story. There are other bad guys who could have join him as well regardless of what canon even the ones who appeared. You could have made Ken still be the Digimon Emperor or the incoporated the other on in season two antagonist in the story. You just treating Duskmon like he is pure evil. Of course he is evil, ut he is actually a boy who has been brainwashed and has lost his memory.

(Previously known as AlbinoChocobo. Just so you don't get confused.)

Yes, different is good. Different is unique. And in some cases, different is insane--and that's me! :D

Nice to know that both Kouichi and BurningGreymon/Vritramon will show up. I can already tell that Kouichi and TK are going to be the best of friends. /sarcasm

Ooh, ooh, will Takuya loose control of the Beast Spirit again? And will Kouji notice the red eyes, go 'oh crap,' and tell everyone to run for their freaking lives? And then will Takuya proceed to pummel Duskmon/Velgemon into oblivion!? 'Cuz that would be COMPLETELY AWESOME!! (-goes back to daydreaming about it-)

hehehe... that was great! at least tkuya and koji are on better terms...

please keep uplosding it's fun to resd fanfics

that was a really good chapter!

i love this story its really awesome

I love your story! Will Kari be okay? Please update soon!

This is great so far. I'm hooked. can't wait until you update.
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Nice job on the chapter! Takuya is as funny as ever and I like the relationship Matt and Kouji have. Now if only Kouji would lighten up!^_~

LOL Poor Kari. So naive to things going on around her.

Great chapter, I'm glad that you finally updated. At the same time I'm also kind of sad that you won't be updating again for a while. (I guess that the price of reading a story from an author with two good storys)

FIANALLY YOU UPDATED! I MEAN WOW YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I'VE WAITED FOR THIS!

Great Story!!

i beginning to worry if you were still into writing this or not. but i see you are and what great work. also i didn't know you have a deviantart account I'll just have to see that. oh and how much longer do i need to wait for burning greymon to appear. one last thing i can defiantly see foreshadowing a koukari and takya/zoe romantic relations and that part with takuya in kari's room when she's changing priceless, hahahaha