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| ravencherithgirl 2008-08-19 ch 5,  | abuseAwesome story! Keep writing. |
| Sevvy101 2007-08-15 ch 5, | abuseYAY! U UPDATED! woohoo! lol i would have read and reviewed sooner, but, me and my friend had a spontaneous sleepover... ...oh the joys :P anyway, this was an amazing chapter! i luv how u ALWAYS perfectly display people's emotions, its just so incredible! Kristana has become one of my fave characters! the ending was great, so sad and dramatic-ish. i really hope u get many great reviews, for u deserve every single one of them! U ROCK SO MUCH! AND ALWAYS WILL! Your Truly, Erika xD |
| SnowySaku 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abuseI haven't reviewed before but I am now. I like the idea and I like the story, but who couldn't like a story with dance in it? the only thing is in the 4th chapter after Kristana collapses Raven checks her pulse to tell if she's still breathing. That isn't correct because you could stop breathing and still have a pulse. please hurry with the next chapter! |
| boolinger 2007-07-27 ch 4, anon. | abusewow! so good! i bet it's from malnutrition (everyone else: duh!). this is really good, please keep going |
| Sevvy101 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abuseomg, is Kristana okay! IS SHE! lol. aww, such awesome robrae fluff ^^ an amazing chapter, from an amazing author ^^ keep up the magnificent work :) U ROCK SO MUCH--its gotten to the point that its not funny at how much u rock! lol! jk Sincerely, Erika |
| Sevvy101 2007-07-22 ch 3, | abusewoohoo u updated! so awesome! omg. drunken raven. that's...a scary sight. lol. jk anyway, yayness for updating! i was so super glad when i checked my inbox! im still eternally jealous of ur writing skills, btw! XD U ROCK SO MUCH! Sincerely, Erika |
| cheekylildevil 2007-07-22 ch 2, | abuseI was trying to discover why i had not recived an update notice on this fic then i realised i had not reveiwed yet, sorry bout that. Nice job with this, raven being in ballet will definitly provide an interesting story line. Update Soon Ncky |
| Sevvy101 2007-07-22 ch 2, | abuseheya! this is an awesome fanfiction, and im glad to have come across it! ur an amazing author: so much detail! it drives me insane! but in a good way lol i hope u can find time to write more, althou i know that this was just recently uploaded and two chapters at that. ur a fantastic author! please keep up the great work! U ROCK SO MUCH! |
| eviltwin222 2007-07-21 ch 2, | abuseupdate i love this please update |