this is pretty good. keep writing

quickly,quickly~
haha, i really love alex/mia and i want to see later development...i don't want to see one of thme died.^ ^

This is good for a start! When I started to read the first few lines, I thought you were doing Isaac's POV until you described Alex's situation. How silly of me (lol)!

If you're interested, please read my GS fics; Golden Sun: Dark Risings and Hide and Seek!:D