Thank you. I love your characters and storyline. Fifty-one weeks is a long break but please finish. We all want to know how things turn out. I already have a box of kleenix invested in your work. How did Hadgrid die? Severus mentions his nine month old son - was that a trick? I think the spy is Lavender trying to protect her parents. The prophecy mentions a power the Dark Lord knows not but if it refers to Terra, Flamma, Aqua and Ether, how could Voldie use 'old magic' to ward his horcruxes? Thank you again, please come back to it.

Finished! I'm all caught up- I just read this fic and its prequel in just a few days ( or nights, rather, as I am up feeding my adopted 1 wk old puppy) and love it. I appreciate that Sev and Herm don't instantly get along as in so many other ss/hr fics. I am really struggling with Ginny's character though. Part of me must be picking up on hr frustration w/ her, part of me suspects her for something much more sinister and part of me feels that she is being too overly dramatic...

What a wonderful backstory and adventure you have created. The attention to detail and complex plot are utterly engaging. I hope you continue your story if only so selfishly I can learn the fates of Hermoine, Snape, the Rice twins, and Zabini. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this and for sharing it with us.

I love this story, I really hope that you'll update soon.
This shows so much potential! I love the relationship you have between Hermione and Snape, it feels really plausible and strong. I really want to know who the other spy is and what happens to their children. Please please update soon. You're doing a wonderful job, I don't often read unfinished stories but the First Act was so good, that I couldn't help myself.

I hope that inspiration strikes you soon, or whatever it is you need to continue on with this story.
Best of luck and again great job!

I'm sorry, I don't speak English... rs rs rs But... I love this story. Wonderful ! I expect updating soon. Thank you!

oh, please do continue!!

absolutely intriguing i love it!! please finish it! i can't wait to see what happens gez don't make us all wait to long its killing me...get cracking u have a real talent :)

I loved the the story that is about a very unusual pair but I simply loved it. I hope to see the end of this story. You are a wonderful writer!

i love this fanfic! i know you have not updated in a long time but please please please update again soon:) this story is one of my favorites:D

update,update!

Loved It! Amazing!

i rly liked this story and i cant wait to read more!
=))

Okay the time jumping still has me reeling. I was a bit confused when I read Forbiden Fruit(which even though I got confused I enjoyed), because of the time jumping and I was sorta hoping that there wasn't any time jumping in this one but... It is a really great story, I enjoy reading it, and I look forward to reading the next chapter! Update soon, please?
-DM

Oh My Gawsh! Twins?! poor sevvie and hermione. can't wait for the next chapter!

This sequel fic to 'Forbidden Fruit' has been fabulous so far... I love how the story and plot is progressing.

Hermione's heartbreak over Severus in the beginning of the fic was so heartbreaking. *sniffle* I know why he did what he did, and said what he said, but still he was so horrible to her... The poor thing.

I'm glad that the Headmaster made Severus tell Hermione the truth--everything, including his promise to kill the Headmaster at the end of the year. The scene with Severus allowing Hermione into his mind and to his memories was wonderful. I'm so glad that they came to an understanding.

I love that Hermione and Severus are repairing their bond, and relationship. It's slow, but progressing. I'm so happy that Hermione has forgiven Severus... forgiven but not forgotten what he did. Their continuing elemental powers are fascinating. I loved the part when the baby/babies responded to the flamma power.

Hermione's anger and mistrust of the Headmaster was great and also sad. He did, and does deserve it, but also he's a General and he's the one who has to make the hard choices. So while I agree with Hermione, I'm also sympathetic too. When she first had her rant, when she told him off, I was cheering her on, and at the same time felt horrible for her breaking the old man's heart... It was so bittersweet.

I'm glad you are continuing writing the two timelines like in the first fic. I really enjoyed it then, and I'm liking it now too.

I'm also liking the adding of Blaise in this fic... I can't wait to see where you go with his character.

As for the mystery spy for Voldemort from the Order, I'm guessing Lavender. IMO, she was acting suspicius in the scene with Ron and Charlie. I could be wrong though...

The twist with Hermione being pregnant with twins is awesome... It was a total surprise too. But it's also sad because her and Severus are giving them away. I understand their reasoning for giving them away, but I'm still sad that they wont be there to raise them. *sniffle* Your killing me with all the angst... I love it though. lol

Outstanding story... it's truly fantastic. I look forward to future chapters!