Holy cow!
Murray!!?
Get a grip man!
Shes like you best friends sister!
Sheesh!!

YAYS! A bit short for my tastes but whatevs! The blind cooper huh? Awesome.

This Chapter was confusing but very well written and i enjoyed it keep up the good work your doing a good job and im sure some people would agree with me but I do have a couple questions will there be any pairings in here Like Sly/Carm and will Carmelita be in this story anymore or no.. please message me back when you get the chance to awnser these questions.

Please update ASAP and keep up the good work.

wow...so far, this is the best Sly fanfic I've ever read! Keep up the good work! It's REALLY AWESOME! And I mean it!

great story!
so sly doesn't own the book no more as he younger child as the older one gets the book
right?

great job! I love the little conflicts between Bentley and Scruffles! LOL! Also the part were Mae has to flirt with that one guy. keep those updates a-coming! :-)

good chapter, lots of comments though. lol
reading on

Hey this is a really great story. Too bad I was never good at figuring out the next moves in a book, I'm gonna have to wait til you update. ^-^

anyways, for a critique, all I have is that you sometimes put the wrong name or word in a place that something else should be and, according to someone I vaguely know (his like, obsessed with my friend) He said/She said is bad, and you should avoid it. I do have to admit it sounds cooler and more professional when you use something else.

Well, that's about all I have because I suck at review but, keep on writin' cuz your story rox the sox that I'm currectly not wearing! Mecha out! (your right, it is awesome)

Pretty awesome d-tect! And i'm never gonna flame or spam the hell outta you. I don't send hate mail, cuz that's the kind of guy i am. Aw crap now i'm gettin preachy! Hey pm me back l8r. Peace. Awesome chapter.

get update.
i'll try to read on soon.
later

Can't wait for the rest! Please continue!

Wait!Youre gonna let her get away with stealing yo story? Oh well, and way this chapter was pretty awesome! I know i keep sayin i have my story up soon and i will just as soon as i finsih typing it. BTW who's this Lawd Galvatron Dude you keep bitchin(and i use that lightly,Very lightly)? No matter, you check out LightHeart77 story yet? Check it out! It is most awesome!

why must their be betrail in these stories, why?
good chapter. reading on.

Why aren't you updating?