 Kadd 2009-09-16 . chapter 14Really amazing story!! Why didnt i find this earlier!?!? hehe Anyways, great story. I am very curious as to who is Klava and how the cult , Chikane and Himeko tie into it. I will definitely keep watch for another update.
Keep writing!!
Krysta |
 Unrelenting Pamphlet 2009-09-01 . chapter 14I absolutely loved it =D.
Pretty much all I want to praise you for has been said already by the other reviewers, though one thing bugs me in the notes of chapter fourteen. Do you mean that this is the last chapter in the story or the chapter had been sitting on your hard drive unfinished? |
 Mio-chan 2009-06-09 . chapter 14 Hey, I spent some time of mine to read your story from the Prologue to Chapter 13.
I must say that this story is quite different from some of the other KnM Fanfics out there.
I really like your writing style and the way you carry your plot lines and such.
I don't like to write agonizingly long reviews, usually short and sweet will cut it.
Please, don't lose your will with writing this story, it is a very good one.
I believe you are doing all too great to just stop here.
Many writers go through hard times, but they get through eventually, one way or another.
( ...to answer your question at the end of Chapter 13; I say go with a full scene. This is a big moment for them. Plus, I think that you'll make it juicy enough... ;D )
Well, I see that you haven't updated in a long long while... (11-29-07)
It's 6-9-09... :/
Hopefully you're okay, I'm worried now, for the story and the author :0
Yes, I appreciate your writing very very much. I welcome it with open arms. It is so pleasing to have good stories to read ^-^
Well, this is the end of one of my reviews for your wonderful work here.
I thank you, and encourage you to continue! :D |
 Avarenda 2009-06-03 . chapter 9omg i feel so embarrassed for Chikane and Himeko, also can't really blame Mako for being in total shock. Somehow i knew this was going to happen.
lets see how Chikane and Himeko get out of this one =P |
 ritsuMonkey7 2009-05-17 . chapter 14Aww I'm sad. I like the story nut no new chapter? I hope you update sometime! |
 Wolf-of-Five-Elements 2009-02-07 . chapter 14Awesome story. Just update already! |
 SakuBloss 2009-01-31 . chapter 11Such a sweet and lovely way to end the chapter, after the grisly scene that Chikane had to witness. Very hawt ;3 |
 Yuri-hime 2009-01-31 . chapter 8That has to be quite honestly be the BEST kiss/makeout scene that I have *ever* read wow @.@
I *truly* wish that you were still working on, and updating this story, as it is quite honestly one of my absolute *fave* fics out of *any* fandom, but I will just continue to read and enjoy what you *have* written, until someday that you decide to come back to this fic =3
THANKS FOR WRITING WHAT YOU HAVE SO FAR! It's a simply AMAZING story! =3
~Yuri-hime~ |
 wataru-girl 2008-12-08 . chapter 14I have to say I am highly anticipating your next update and I find myself rather sad to think that this may possibly be the ONLY fic I will ever read with Rei and Klavdiya. :'-( Please continue! ^_^ |
 tetsuki109 2008-12-01 . chapter 14dude! this is like amazing!! and its been like a year since u last updated!! i wanna read more!! QQ |
 Lolfest 2008-11-29 . chapter 14I love this story. I forgot about it until my friend reminded me...please update it soon!! Any of your work would suffice, really.
Love,
Queer Prophet |
 zenshiki09 2008-11-27 . chapter 14wow! great! honestly i only watch knm recently and i discovered your story recently also... and i love it! please do continue! :) |
 Kiros Razer 2008-10-04 . chapter 14I hope that you will one day return to this fic, so many people have found this to be wonderfully written and I am sure want to read more..
I'm one of the new readers that has fallen for this series and found your fic to be one of the best written for this series. |
 Your Insidious Paranoia 2008-10-04 . chapter 1This story is very well written, and it's definitely an attention grabber. I stayed up into the wee hours of the morning reading this, because I couldn't pull myself away! The characters are well portrayed, and believable, which is one thing that really stood out to me. Other than characters, I love the way everything flows. You have good diction, and the dialogue is nearly perfect. Definitely things that I could see Chikane and Himeko saying. Also, I really enjoyed the side-story involving these "Rei" and "Klava" characters. They fit well into the story, and make it much more interesting. Just as a side note, I feel myself becoming fond of Klava, because she reminds me a lot of someone I know, and care for deeply. But before I start rambling, I have to say that I am very much looking forward to your next installment of this story... Great job! |
 somebodyyy 2008-08-15 . chapter 14Oh no, I wanted to cry when I got to the end of the chapters. XD
This is by far my favorite KnM story. Even your original characters have me pulled in...you truly make them come alive. And what an interesting plot! I'm so intrigued!
Please update soon, though I understand having a busy life. :) |