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| skymaster23 2007-08-24 ch 4,  | abuseThis chapter is a good one, but there's two problems. First, Kuchiki's last form is shukei, hakuteiken. Also, hisagi should know of wabisuke's ability from the fight with that bount with the tie and glasses. |
| Shiotashi 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abuseThis was really good! But towards the end I wasn't really expecting for Isane or Hisagi to die (or did they? It seemed like they did.) The funny bits mingle perfectly with the battle. *nodnod* Update soon! The plot's moving really quickly! -Shiotashi- |
| darkangel1910 2007-08-23 ch 3, | abuseIsshin is an absolute idiot. i love him though. Update soon. |
| darkangel1910 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abuseGin Needs To Die! |
| Hermes priestess 2007-08-13 ch 3, | abuseupdate soon! its a great fic i feel sorry for byakuya, being saddled with jinta |
| weepie94 2007-08-11 ch 3, | abuseWow... this was... wow. I must admit that it was very entertaining; stories involving Hueco Mundo and the future are rarely funny, and more depressing than not. Your flare for writing IC is impressive, I can see these people saying and doing MOST of the things they did...(Some of them...*shudders* ;)...) I love how Kon was singing that annoying song... And I can definitely see the people who were fighing actually fighting, i.e. Kenpatchi and Noitora, or Shunsui and Stark, and I can so see Hitsugaya go right for Aizen. Thanks for this fic and I will read the rest! |
| swordbunny4486 2007-07-28 ch 3, | abusecool lol |
| windlily 2007-07-27 ch 3, | abuseHo boy. Here we go again. Hitsugaya seems just a little fudged, but I absolutely adore everyone else. Especially Kuchiki dealing with Jinta and those hilarious Isshin/Ryuuken moments. Priceless. Your humor equals love. :D |
| Shiotashi 2007-07-27 ch 3, | abuseThe last part made me laugh. I like all the battles each person is in but maybe you could describe a bit more? It could just be me but... o_o It seems like it's mostly talking. I'm very slow...I just noticed that all 3 chapters begin with 'E' *whacks self* Can't wait for an update~ -Shiotashi- |
| Shiotashi 2007-07-24 ch 2, | abuseLove it as usual! And I really like the fact that you kinda twisted it with Mayuri (Clown-Face) joining Aizen. Can't wait for you to update~ Shiotashi |
| Zz-Edge-X-Meirouki-zZ 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI WANT YOU TO UPDATE!! DO YOU HEAR ME?! UPDATE! Oh, come on! Please? This story is very exciting and I want to see the battles and what happens! Including with Soi Fong! She has to battle two arrancars with only her fuku-taichou! UPDATE! |
| KuroAi15 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abusehaha...that's funny... hmm... Hey! that would be a funny fanfic topic. Mayuri is tantalized by some gadgets and he'll do anything for them. And I mean ANYTHiNG. thanx! |
| Noble Skuld the Legend kill... 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAww man this is fun. Mayuri switching sides? I wouldn't be suprised. Must read more! |
| Shiotashi 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI love it and it's really funny. I ended up biting my lip, trying not to wake up my mom. Gin/Rangiku huh? They've been one of my favorite pairings for a while besides Byakuya/Hisana. ^-^ Can't wait for an update~ |