Sorry about the military camp, no net huh? I could make it but I really wouldnt want to . I liked this, its very well done.

I thought that your fiction was good. It really makes a person think a lot since it speaks of dying and living. Really makes me wonder, whatever.

I could not help but notice that you wrote: "But he couldn’t help but thing that the other had been beautiful". Did you mean to put 'think' instead of 'thing'. It seems to go along better that way.

You should name your new cell phone Marluxia--not because it's a shade of pink but because Renée is so French. I shudder at the thought of anything French because I had a horribly year at school learning French 2 & 3 (the teacher was horrible).

Well, like I said before, your fiction was good. I enjoyed it.

:) achrom