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| mabelreid 2007-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseI read this with a giant grin on my face. I like the way you work in thing like buffalo burgers and beer, or the exotic cuisine,it made it more real Love the line “Right. What is it? The sex is great but you don’t really want to be seen in public with me?” Great job |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI'm grinning like a fool... This was great.. I love Danny... JENNIFER |
| chili-peppers 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseSquee!! I loved this so much! Brilliant work! Im loving your fics!. XD |
| GRACE5 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseyeah pretty much the best D/L i've ever read...seriously, great job! last first date...awesome if only the writers on the show wrote like you, lol. |
| Shortcake82 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI so loved this. That was sweet. I could really see there first date going like that. I also think you stayed very close to how they characters would act. Good job. |
| serenity2bliss 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuse*thud!* Wow! Amazing first date...wish i was that lucky!lol! I loved this..i think Danny was very sweet and the part where he told her that he hoped that it will be her last first date, was really sweet *sigh* I need to get myself a Danny! |
| Mistryja 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseSoo cute!! Jayna x |
| RockinLizzy 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAh, this is so sweet, and I just really love the ending. I think you captured them perfectly. Although, just a note: this story does not need to be rated M, it does fit squarely in the Teen category (but it's totally your choice as an author, so I'm sorry if I'm being intrusive). Can't wait for more of your work. :D |
| daytimedrama 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseSo cute, and fun and sexy. I think you have Linsday and Danny's voices pegged. Amazing! More More More!! Your plot bunnies are on fire! |