I loved it

omg this is amazeing! in the movie when i first watched it i wanted to give eustace a slap in the face as well as edmund in the first film now edmund is one of my fave cachaters not more then peter though. any way good job

I love it!

Having just realized that this story exists, I wanted to let you know that I think it is very good. I very much enjoyed reading it.

There is definitely something about fantastic love that makes you want to pass it on. Even little things can turn into big things if you just get the "spark" going, as you said. Not that Aslan's death was a little thing of course! But little things - like paying for someone's coffee - can spread forward if you just pass it on. Well-written and effective.

These two do have a lot in common, don't they? They were both obnoxious pricks at the beginnings of both their stories, but through Narnia and Aslan, were given the chance to change. I think that Aslan is sometimes like the monkey wrench thrown into the machinations of Lewis' characters; just when they're about to break, something stops them and they have the opportunity to fix whatever's going wrong. On to the next chapter!

I just discovered your writings - a good find!

I like the way the two young men are relating to each other. Of course Edmund would find out eventually exactly what Aslan had done for him - like Lucy, I think he ought to be told, and I'm pleased that you let him. He and Eustace will have lots of similar experiences to share.

Oh, and I claim the bonus points - I was a teenager in the early seventies ;-)

This chapter was as wonderful as the first! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and you got the message across perfectly.

That was a wonderfully written dialoge between Edmund and Eustace and both of their letters sounded characteristic of each of them. What Edmund is telling Eustace is so very true and you get it across quite nicely.

Thunderous long applause. That was great!

Yay! A second chapter! My evening is made!

Well, having someone excited to see him must be a whole new experience for Eustace, the first of many since being un-dragoned, I suspect. As always, your descriptions and dialogue are a joy, but I think my favorite line is this:

You just can’t keep his love to yourself.

That's a wonderful phrase, made all the better because it's true!

...Every time I try to think of what to write as a review for this, it ends up...awkward, but oh well.

You're awesome, and this fic is no exception. I'd almost forgotten how Eustace and Edmund disliked each other, and now they're buddies. That's great.

And Edmund's explanation of love and stuff was...amazing and kind of inspiring. Got me thinking, as I assumed it was supposed to...

Keep up the super writing!

oh wow! petra, that was so good! my compliments to the author. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Gee, I wonder what song you were practicing! ;)

Nicely done.

Once again, dear Petra, you've manage to create something that's thoroughly wonderful and entertaining and touching. The voices on both boys are perfect and very much in character. I can see such an exchange existing between them. Eustace's brutal honesty about them both (love that 'you’ve become much nicer, and pleasant to be around, much as I would have hated to admit it') and Edmund's acceptance of that honesty shows their maturity and how they've grown not only into maturity, but in faith. Just lovely. Bravo Zulu!