at first i thought you were saying that you wrote this when you were 11 and i thought 'wow an 11 year old really knows how to write'. but you aren't 11 but your writing is still fantabulous! real cute story!

SUPER CUTEE!i LOVE it!

That was really pretty.

oh lovely story. really cute and sweet
love Flyleaf and that song as well :P
might have to go listen to it now :P

This was really adorable. I love the way you kept them mostly in character, especially Mamoru. So many authors anymore try to make him more of something he obviously isn't. I really liked this, thanks.

Really very sweet story! I love it!

awesome very cute one shot

i love it!

That was adorable.
Nicely done too.
;D

Hey this is very cute!! Very sweet and nice.

I like it, of course! :)

Poor guy, that must be difficult to deal with. I love UxM Thank you!

THIS WAS REALLY GOOD! PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!

I really liked this story. Though this particular plot-line is a little cliché, there was something a little different about it as well. I liked that they didn't confess their undying love at the end, which would have been painfully unrealistic.

One thing noticed was that at the beginning Usagi said she was going to go home to take care of the injury but later she tells him that she received the injury when she was at home. Even though we know that Usagi made this up, it might have been better if Mamoru picked up on her contradiction. As it makes it seem that Mamoru didn't realise, which doesn't really fit with his intelligent character.

Favourite parts were when he strategically placed himself on the sidewalk and that he bought her fav popsicles. As I said before, I really, really liked how you finished it.

it was cute. i like it. continue writing other stories. u have so little reviews. i think you should change your summary. more people would read this story if you make the summary more interesting. most people read a story if the summary is good or they have a lot of reviews.