OMG that was...WICKED lolz but really that was good!

Aw thats really cute.

Cute story! It was well written!

aw... that was so cute and very well written

“You were probably right, Miss Totti, I’m ridiculously impatient… and I think your bloody amazing. But- if I may ask - why the change of mind?”
Lol. Gotta love Charlie - of all the Weasley siblings I imagine him as being rather hot :) Very funny, very sweet, and you 've managed to write Oc's that are fun and not remotely mary sueish. The humour was really well done and showed the camaraderie within the team without being overdone. It would be fun to see what happened to Christin and Charlie "next summer" - just a thought ;)
Hugs,
jo

im going to have to draw you a diagram someday of the huge, gigantic smile on my face.
i am so sorry i couldnt get this review to you sooner but it seems the alert thingies are down again on and ive also been swamped with work and vball. but yeah, the latter part didnt really matter because i printed out all 26 pages of goodness that you wrote for me. and im not going to lie, i thinkive read it atleast 5 times by now. and Kate? not only do you ROCK MY SOCKS A MILLIONS TIMES, but you know me far too well. EXAMPLES:
1."The flying banners waved at her and Christin laughed"
~~i would laugh at something ridic like that

2."chattering like a nutter"
~~i do that on a daily basis sucessfully, especially when im riled up.

3."Christin felt awkward and embarrassed, and wished she had Ash’s knack for manners and etiquette"
~~cough story of my life cough

4."dynamite" & "speedier than speed"
~~i probably have said both of these once or twice...

5."what a klutz!"
~~the more prominant story of my life. no need to rub it in.

6."I don’t even like English accents"
~~australian ones are hotter anyway, please.

7.just the word sarcasm covers a few things...

8.Hamburger Eater
~~and proud

9."Candy was also another thing that made her love quidditch- if she didn’t need to train so much for the sport she’d weigh like five hundred tonnes with all the junk she ate."
~~what's your point...

10."christin SNORTED with laughter"
~~like its my job

11.“Uh, yes, two brothers and a sister... and more cousins than I can count, my family’s Italian so were pretty close.”
~~pretty much

12."she never cried"
~~damn striaght

13. "you're a terrible liar totti"
~~this is true

14. "there were plenty of things she was good at- like drawing, and writing, but they seemed to often take a back seat to quidditch because she loved to be moving around."
~~so im guessing kinda gave away my secret passion, hmm?

and that, my dear, more loverly than loverly kate. is all the ways you know me too well. seriously, omg. you legit know me more than i know myself and you know what? im kinda glad. youre such a terrific friend, you really have no idea. and im not even going to get into your fantasticness at being an author, because if this doesnt just radiate MAGNIFICENT there is seriously something wrong with the world.

and omg you are TOO FUNNY.
i would be reading this at work and i would--yes--snort with laughter. it was so bad, everyone was staring at me. you want examples? i shall give you a few examples:
1.'beater buddy'
2.joel in a towel with a butterbeer and a beaters bat is subtle sexay and i found that funny--dont ask...
3.kings ace is a kick ** name.
4.my repetative stuttering
5.the laptops appearance
6.ujust charlie in general
7.my oliver moment with my intense speach
8.joel's fred moment of bravadoing shortly after number 7 which made me quite sad after i realized my loverly redhead would say such a thing. (im near a depression over that but were not talking about that now)
9. you being all ladylike and digging dirt out of your nails--dont ask.
10. my inability to get homework done.
11. the fact that i was personally thinking the coffee was an atempted sabatage
12. that i dutifully spilt the coffee
13. you playing with like 932474 sweaters on
14. 'chiristin's superheroes of beaters'
15. that im damn good at quidditch
16. joel acting as a man blanket...i kinda want one now
17. that burn of a tie
18. hamburger eaters!
19. 'it was a pity no one pointed out to joel or kaye that all the guys kaye was attracted to looked like joel' :)
20. that charlie brings me a flower/goodie like every other second.
21. portuguese TEAMO youre so original you have no idea
22. 'cantankerous'...i just like the word
23. 'christin made for the shower and stripped' dont ask, but i just read myself undressing and found that odd thus funny. i actually wrote in the margin 'WHOO DOGGY'
a nudist colony
25.ash's subtle subject changing coughs
26. 'freaking evans, psht, yeah'~NY lingo kicks **
27.joel as the fat lady

and im sure there were a bunch of other things, like how you played to peoples chracter but ill go into that all later. ill like mail you the print out and you can see all my margin-writings. but omg, kate, i truly truly truly truly truly truly truly truly TRULY loved it.
you have no idea what kind of fabulous friend you are. im seriously going to ship myself to oz and give you like THE BIGGEST HUG EVER.
and this totally made my bday all the better, even if was like a week ago...but you know deadlines mean nothing to me. :D

love you so so so so so so so so so so SO MUCH
MORE THAN I LOVE CHARLIE!
...which is a lot...

lots o love!

I love this story it is amazing.
I shall have to check out some of your others.
I am assuming this is a one shot?
Keep writing!!
Lalena xx

yay! =] can i please mail-order a Jake?
thank ye kindly, ma'am. ;) hahaha. i wish.
as i said before i love this and i'm pretty sure Giddy will too. by the way, this reminded me - i havent posted the chapter of my own story for her yet.. eek.
love ya,
Ash x