I'll bet Itachi is Kiras father.

at first when i started reading this i didn't think i would like it but i rely turly do, please write more soon ^^

I loved this story I thought it was so original and it was written really well with no visible flaws, I also liked the plot. Although you may think you have wasted your time on this I think the complete opposite! You've put your time into a good peice of writting!

You really need to continue this Kira fanfiction. It's so good, and you portray the characters so well!
Oh and by the way, I love Itachi too!

This is absolutely amazing and just very enrapturing. I love the mystery behind Kira, and overall I just really love this story!
:D

You should stop saying that this is 'crap' and that 'noone should even read this' because if you say that, people really will stop reading. And they shouldn't 'cause this is very good.
You should be more positive about this, I really liked it. But when you talk about your story like that, it makes me not want to review. @_@
But that's me. Awesome job!
Keep up the good work <3

thx for updating! this is actually a really good story! anywayz keep updatin!!=]

I don't see how you dislike writting this story, I find it good. Sasukes' and Kiras' relationship is amusing to read about :)

Keep up the good work ! :)

In reference to my previous review, I understand what I meant by you have a squishy story. It is open ended, so there's a lot of possibilites for things to happen. It lacks predictability; creating intensity in your story. Because there's no predictability, you can tug and tease at this anyway you want without seeming cliche. Quite frankly, this story isn't crap. I've read alot of bs on this site (why I'm never on it) and this is one of the better stories that you find. And I do like your other fanfics, I've read most of them(:

Update Update update! Please!

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!
I love this story with every fiber of my being.
It's simply amazing, with Kira unable to remember anything. I am so anxious to find out how she is related to Itachi?

Please update soon!

I think that this story is very interesting. I'm kind of sad to see it not being updated, because it has a lot of potential, but it's still amazing.

You said that you wanted plot suggestions, so, uh, here. :]

They could continue traveling, and run into some of the Akatsuki members, but not Itachi. Or, run into some Konoha ninjas who know her, but she doesn't remember them.
It might be fun to throw in a little randomness. Like the group go to a hot springs for the night.
Or maybe have a battle break out between Hebi and a group of ninja, and Kira suddenly remember some techniques that would lead to some of her past. But her still remember nothing.
I don't know.

But I hope that I gave you some inspiration! I love all of your stories. They're amazing.

This plot is going somewhere very interesting. Please continue to update. Otherwise, I shall forever call you pizza! O_O

Anyway, I cannot wait to see how this story develops. Your story has this squishy consistency. I don’t know what that means either yet. But believe me, it’s a good thing. I guess what I’m trying to say is, that it’s so moldable and funny to read. I don’t know why its funny, I guess because I’m weird. Anyway, you have a really interesting plot here, so I advice you to continue writing. It’s really good. :D

hey this chapter was actually pretty good! i loved the little sequence between Kira and Sasuke XD even though i don't care much for sasuke, it was still fun. and yes, i do want you to keep updating! (it just makes me more ashamed that i haven't updated all summer... i suck.)

hey! this updated last year!!COME ON! its 2008 baby!!