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Reviews For: Dr Seuss

Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseHm.
Your beloved former beta 2007-07-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey girlie! I absolutely love, though you know that already through IM lol. And I was so evily correcting your spelling ;-) But that's what you get for having your former beta read hehe. But really it's wonderful, you did a great job for your first one :-) and I agree I can just see Kaylee having Dr. Seuss :-) So you know what her favorite story is? :-)
Taraq 2007-07-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseEh. It was okay, for a first try I feel this was really a great effort. I loved the over protectivness of Jayne's inner monologue but I don't think you really captured the voice of the character. I think you did Kaylee's voice much better. You keep repeating the 'big brother' thing a little too much but, it was sweet. I really loved the idea of the book thing. Good job, I hope my critiques have not discourged you and your writing but hopefully inspired you to continue writing and to try to do better.
Anchoret 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseAw...that's just so sweet! I always thought that Jayne thought of Kaylee as a little sister...you portrayed them well! Anchoret