OMG, that was freaking creepy, and I don't really understand why you're writing this as a fanfic when it would have read just a s well if you'd done this story with your own orignal characters...
That said, your writing IS good, and the story is well-written, you have excellent grammar and sentence structure.
But I was confused by the plotline.

Well, I started to read this one a while ago, but for some reason I was really thrown off. However, if I had kept going just a little farther, I would have seen Edgeworth get attacked and sort of tortured, which would have totally captured my interest at the time instead of months later.

So, what I'm saying is, I should've given this a bit more of a look; I guess I wasn't really feeling up to new things at the time, but I am now because there aren't enough Miles/Franziska fics out there to read. So, this is definately something very out of the ordinary as far as PW fiction goes, and I am very interested. I noticed that it hasn't been updated in a while, and I can only hope that this wil change soon. I'm still very curious to see what Miles has to do with these creatures.

I hope to see an update on this one soon if possible. I will be waiting regardless. It's odd, but it's well-written and has really captured my attention after getting used to the style.

-Phoenix Tilea out...

For some reason I find hard to define, I really like this. It's well written and in-character, but it's also... exciting? I like very much what you've done with this bizzare, science-fiction story.

JesusChristaliens. *flails*

The story is so eerie and unique and really really really awesomely awesome. Phoenix Wright and /aliens/?

Egads, I can't wait for this to update.