Whoa, I didn't know you write too! (It's anthrop.) This was great, a nice 1 a.m. find. I really liked the rhythmic quality of it, and the descriptions were fantastic. You made one of the few scenes I like from KHII even better. Think I'm going to stalk your gallery now...

I find I still really like this.

Your not allowed to take it down.

That was ... insanely sad. But very realistic. The descriptions of his pain are wonderful.

It isn't exactly rhythmic, but it's still wonderfully written. I don't usually approve of authors using in-game dialogue, but I think it worked well.