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Reviews For: Hatred of Death

lady kaname kuran
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abusei love it! you are a very good writer!
Panda
2007-08-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhoa hoho...O_O that wedding scene was quite spicy. I can see why it's so many people's favorite scene. It's one of mine as well ^_^. I really loved reading about Kazumi and Kimiko's relationship. It was really sweet to read about how much they were in love to when they got married to them being parents to Kaname and lastly to their tragic deaths. I really wished there was a happier ending to this story but I knew it had to end this way *sobs* Great job with Hatred of Death! I really enjoyed reading this fanfic. The story felt so real *_* like everything that was written really happened.
julnika
2007-08-03
ch 6, anon.
abusehey atemu. just finished the entire fic. aw what a sad tragic ending. Just as the title "hatred of death" suggested. Lol for some reason though i was laughing so hard at the ending. What Akemi did to Ryou in the end was just so funny. Oh yes and there were some really hot scenes. Especially that kimikoxkazumi scene after the wedding. My favorite scene. lol i also liked the ryou scenes, and especially kaname's scenes. Ah just seeing his name would make me jump. can't wait to read a sequal. lol. kaname's avenge.
Cesarae
2007-08-02
ch 6, anon.
abuseAw...the ending is so sad, i almost cry when they both died, gosh why this happend to them, and poor kanamechii. Dang Ryou, i wanna kill u for ruining kaname's life. Ah, althought it's so sad, ur story plot is so good. Hohoho, my most fav scence is the wedding night. U're so talent at writing, keep on writing, i love ur fic. Gambatte ne atemu-chan.
Cesarae
2007-07-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseAtemu-chan, your fic seem to getting better and better, keep on writing to improve your skill. K, this is my suggestion for your fic...um...u know...i think everytime u write the conversation of the character, u should write it like this Ex.
"...", Kazumi Said Blahblabla...
"...", Kimiko...
and u could put the thing that u wanna describe into paragraph, in this way i think your work will look more professional and easy to read u know. K, the left is my stupid review, kekeke
Hah, it's such a great fic atemu-chan, especially love love scence in the bathroom, i love it. and kaname's parent is so adorable, thier love is so strong. Ah, u make me love this couple u know ^_^. Hmm...but about senri and akemi...u know, now that senri confess that he love both and akemi seem to understand it...um...how can u end the story in the tragic way. It seem that each couple have their own world u know. gomen ne if u don't like my review.
Crimson-chan
2007-07-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseHi Atemu-chan, this story is really, really, hot. I can't believe how creative you are. I cant really critique on anything, because this story is very well written and very enticing and interesting.

The names you chose for Kaname's parents are really cute, Kimiko and Kazumi, very creative, and I can definitely see these two as Kaname's parents. I am looking forward to reading more of this fic, can't wait to see the rest of the chapters! Continue writing, it's great! =)

-CrimsonRain
midnitearz
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abusei can't wait to see what happens. please update soon!
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