Oh my gosh!! So who is this "lovely thing" might I ask? (I already have an idea of who it is) Hahahahaa!! Keep going.

this is getting more interesting

Oh that was PRICELESS! OH I have not laughed so much in a LONG time. Well Done!

ok whats going on

i cant wait for your next chapter this mini series thing is so col! its like you know exactly how they would act...i know this might sound a little dramtic but...you should really see if you can get this turned into an actual mini series or even better see if you can get some conncetion to an anime publisher this would be gold on tv! see i told you it would be dramtic! keep writing



a huge fan malena(mali)

I wonder if this visit will be as entertaining as it was when Shu showed up in drag.

Wow. Eiri wants to meeat the family now? Interesting. Keep going.

i red this chapter yesterday but forgot to leave a review the story is great can't wait to find out what stuff eiri and shu will get up to at the shine (wink wink) well i'll be waiting for the next chapter

I can only imagine Shu's sister and Mother's reaction to Yuki. But to keep their stalker tendancies to a minimum perhaps K would be willing to keep them in line. I don't think Shu's family have met K, so their first meeting should be legendary. Either they pee in their pants from fright, or K pees in his pants from fright as in the other story they were a bit over zealous in thei Yuki worship.

Dear Mew Mokuba I love reading both of your stories and I cannot what for the next chapter .I would also like to wish you a Happy Birthday tomorrow and I hope you have a great time.

Wow. This is going to be interesting. Eiri meets Shuichi's parents. Keep going.

great chapter

mika should so leave Touma and go with K they'ed make a lovely couple

Please, keep it coming

hi i really like your story and i have been waiting very impatiently for your updates. Of all the fanfics I had read, yours is one of the best. Keep it up and please update faster. I just love this Eiri and Shuichi. REMEMBER UPDATE, UPDATE FASTER FASTER. Smiles, thumb up for you.