God, this was so good! I cried whole time reading this! Well, except for the last line, which was really awesome.

Poor George! I cried when Fred died, but I never actually really thought about how George must feel. Very good, darling!

Oh gawd...even though the last line was funny..I'm crying T_T

Damn, I absolutely hated JK when she killed Fred off, hated her with a passion.

Loved it, short and simple but filled with emotion, excellent

NO FRED!! D=

I cried in the book and now I'm crying again.

Awe. So sad. I too was pretty mad when they killed Fred off and fighting along side Percy noless. George won't be the same, the whole weasly family and probaly the community won't be the same. This was very well written.

-cries- maah!

-cries harder- hm!

-cries- Raw emotion! Something that you aren't usually fond of writing my dear!

I think I liked your SnapeLily drabble better than this one for some reason. Maybe it's because I pictured George taking his brother's death differently (ie, either so devestated that he can hardly feel anything or ruefully proud of his twin for dying for the cause, as he would have), or maybe just because I have even more sympathy for Snape (who suffered a lonely, terrible life as well as death; Fred, on the other hand, led a happy, full life).

Also, you might want to watch out for tense shifting. Ie, instead of using "who's," you should use "who would" or "who was" to keep up with the established past tense. This will help the story to flow better ^^

I loved the last line. It's just SO Fred and George that it made me smile...I'll bet, wherever he is, Fred IS laughing. And I imagine that gives George a bit of comfort.

. ( . MVS . ) .

I've been reading loads of these all day
This one is definately one of the best
I too still wonder why Fred...why? And poor George...i mean to lose a brother would be bad enough but a twin...god, I can't imagine.
anyway, this is truly a well done piece of work

wow...it's really raw in emotion. And I agree with everyone else, this should have been in the book and the last line is beautiful..just what Fred would do, eh?

*wails* So sad! ...Why /did/ she kill Fred. Of all the people she could have offed...

Anyways, the last line was the best. Quite insightful.

*tears up* This oneshot should've totally been in that book!! I was shocked and slightly mad when Rowling didn't even put how GEORGE was feeling and reacting about Fred's death *pouts* Great oneshot^^

It does feel wrong. One Twin...You know, I actually read this one crazy theory that Rowling should kill off one of the twins, but I completely dismissed it. She wouldn't be that cruel or sick, would she. Then in the story or epilogue she doesn't even resolve anything. I wanted to know what happened, what everyone, especially George was feeling. Heck, I wanted to know that about everyone that died or was injured. I wanted to know who died. She never even said. Harry knew a lot of people.

I miss Fred and my heart aches for George. One twin...so wrong.

very well written. i hated this part, i thought that once percy came back that just maybe the entire weasley family would make it through the war. i almost cried when it happened, and i have never cried during any of the books... oh well. what did you think of the epilouge?

gd fic