I liked your story...being a fan of the Earthsea trilogy, I think you realistically portrayed the characters...I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.

Intriguing, if a little confusing. I like it!

hm, well having read the books ova and ova im not quite convinced at this, its just not the earth sea type.

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Gathers small mob... *multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part**multi part* sorry, got a bit carried away.... luv it anyway.

Oooh... I see the startings of a really good plot!! Keep 'em coming! :D

*puts hand up* Mee! Meeeeee! I ordered the new book from Doubleday book club! *runs out to mailbox again to check for large rectangular parcels*

I have read all of the earthsea fics (shame there isnt more) and this is my FAV! hehehe... write more!

i read this before and i'm sure i reviewed but i can't find it. i loved all the earthsea books (read the first two 8 times at least in a week) and i loved this. hope to publish an earthsea fic so watch out 4 it!

Good! Please continue!

Great story! Im big fan :) PLz write another chapter!

hmmm..... nice enough. It seems a bit hard to follow the plot. Maybe you could try sticking to a single POV?

Continue or else I won't give a further opinion

Wow! That was anawesome fic! Not too detailed, not too deep, and totally believable! Keep it up.

Really nice. Please continue it, you're beginning to get the bits of a multipart here.

*waves* Hi Von-Ca! Wuz up? I really like your story
and probably shouldn't be doing during class but
it's really good! There is certaintly potential for
a multi-part! Have a nice day!