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| MC 2007-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting story. |
| Momo-chan12 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseaww,that was so sweet!I loved it!^__^It was awesome,I liked reading about it!ooh,are you going to write the other girl's picture events too?It'd be great to read all of them,I hope you do!It was a cute story and I hope you write more like this! |
| FishSoRule 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cool! I really wish it had a little more JackxPopuri fluff though... All well! It was still pretty good! |
| Laney-chan 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAw! Cute story. I love it! |
| Ultra Drama Queen 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was so adorable! I thought it was very cute. Maybe, now, you should write about... Elli's "scene thing" or Karen's "scene thing" If you haven't seen them, just ask me, I've seen all of them! Elli's, Karen's and Maria's have lots of prettyful lights... :D! Anyways, good story! Jack is so cool... sometimes he can be evil though, I've seen it in stories! Ok, well, bye! |
| Peach the Hedgehog 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was really sweet! The added dialouge makes the scene better, too! Keep up the good work! And good luck with future fics! |