This is pretty interesting. Very well written.

However, (if I should be finicky) when countinc up Akari's family, you forgot Douma (Her brother).

Very interesting. I especially like Akari's chapter. I think it was rather cute when she was trying to say "thank you".

I do suggest you to put the "Notes" in the bottom or on the top of the fic though (Not that it was many notes. Just a suggestion for the future).

Very well written.

I'll keep an eye on this story

-Xue

I haven't read them yet but they sound be cool!

I wouls like to read about my man : Moriya Minakata soon!coz I am completly crazy about him... X3

Thank U 4 tose chapters! & C U next time :D