Reviews for Welcome To Bullworth

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Violetwitch 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseHmph...I've been reading this for so long, and can't believe I've waited this long to review smacks forehead bad Violet. Anywho, I love this fic. I was afraid Gary would be really OOC, but I think you pulled it off quite nicely. Actually, pretty much everyone was kept in character. Really good job ^^ Oh, and maybe, since you're following the game's story, thinking about what Jimmy's doing might help you figure out what's going on with Chantelle? Just a thought...
Alexa 2008-06-23 ch 12, anon.	abuseYep, I knew that chapter in the game.It was chapter 2 right? Jimmy dated with Pinky, the spoiled rick kid. Oh, man. I didn't know it would end up this way. I didn't know Jimmy will hate Chantelle after she refused to say her feelings to him. But its not her fault. Chantelle only looked at Jimmy as a friend. Only friend.
A Fan of this story 2008-06-23 ch 12, anon.	abuseYou never seem to let me down.
Tinkies 2008-06-21 ch 12,	abuseGreat chapter! I actually thought that little moment with Chantelle and Gary on the beach was for real! Here, it was all just a little daydream! DARN IT!! ANYWAY, keep up the awesomeness & PLEASE continue immediately!! ^_^ Also, if you need more inspiration for your story, why don't you try playing the game for a little while? You know, cruise the streets, listen to the townies, look around at the shops & buisnesses... maybe you'll get an idea or two?! Anyway, GOOD LUCK!! ^_^
Shojin Anime 2008-06-20 ch 12,	abusewow that was a very interesting chapter. but it just kinda seems not like jimmy to get all u know like that cause chantelle didnt return his feelings. i dont know if it just me and i admit i am a jimmy fan but just saying. i thought that was really gary she was talking to and then darn its just a dream. though i am very curious to see what will happen now that gary has witnessed it all. i cant really see gary saying that last line. i feel sorry for her now and hope jimmy gets beat up or something. i am loving all this and hope for more gary action.
FilipinaVii 2008-06-20 ch 12,	abuseOMG I thought that was real... wow I didn't see that coming! But then I was glad because it would of been a little corny if he said 'I always knew that…That your heart belongs to me.' XD... amazing chapter! yay she is realising her feelings for him =]! Stupid Jimmy, he needs to go play in traffic. Update soon! peacebaby
Shojin Anime 2008-06-17 ch 11,	abuseIm really enjoying this story alot. You got everyone in character and your oc is amazing. At first i was worried she might turn into a mary-sue but she is still far from it. My only complaint is that its kinda hard to read when you dont space out your paragraphs. other than that your fic is great. i love the love triangle you made with chantelle. i hope there is more fluff with your oc and gary in the next chapter. loved the cliffy at the end makes things more suspenseful. i kinda want her to get with jimmy but its your fic. update soon!
EvilChick101 2008-06-14 ch 11,	abuseI loved it! Keep going! I want to know what will happen next so badly!
Alexa 2008-06-13 ch 11, anon.	abuseAH! THAT'S A GOOD NEWS! I CAN FINALLY READ YOUR STORY IN AN EASE! :)
FilipinaVii 2008-06-11 ch 11,	abuseIt was brilliant enough for me! So happy you updated! Ahh I'm so happy Chantelle doesn't like Jimmy back! Hoorah. Bleh, he kissed her, lol, and Gary was watching! Awesome. Can't wait for next update!
Tinkies 2008-06-11 ch 11,	abuseAnother update... FINALLY! Anyway, EXCELLENT chapter!! Such a cliffhanger at the end there, too! Bet Gary's REALLY jealous now since he saw Jimmy kiss Chantelle...! Anyway, I can't wait to read what happens next! Hopefully there'll be some Gary x Chantelle fluffy scenes coming soon... like the next chapter perhaps?!?! Keep up the frickin' AWESOMENESS & PLEASE CONTINUE IMMEDIATELY, A.S.A.P.!! ^_^
FilipinaVii 2008-06-11 ch 10,	abuseHey the story is going great! Your not going OOC and I am happy about. I hope she chooses Gary's side, they seem to have a little... thing there, haha. Ah, Jimmy/Chantelle? No, Jimmy's gross! lol. Well that's just my thoughts... update soon, because it's already June! (OMFG THAT RHYMED.)
Ashleh 2008-05-10 ch 10, anon.	abuseJune? I think I just died a little inside. :/ I absolutely love your story and can't wait for Gary and Chantelle to get together. :) I can't wait til June. :D
Alexa 2008-04-28 ch 10, anon.	abuseI LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! WELL DONE! But you know, the more your story is getting longer, the more its getting merrier! WOOHOO! AGAIN, GOOD JOB! MWAH! -Alexa
Sorceress Eternity 2008-04-19 ch 9,	abuseHehe, I couldn't help but to laugh at the bad words in the chapter (like the F word) because I noticed the rating was for K+. Ooh, I wonder if Chantelle and Gary will end up dating? That'd be interesting since sociopaths usually don't care about anyone but themselves. Would Gary eventually develop real feelings for Chantelle? I can't wait to find the answer to that even if it is in much later chapters. :D Out of curiousity, are you British? If so, have they used British voice actors on the characters in the game? I've always wondered how games with voice acting sounds in other countries. That'd be so strange to hear because we are all so used to the ones we hear all the time.

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