Really great story, my favoite part was the end where the Mauraders were arguing in the photograph.

I loved the Ted and Harry moment there, really cute.
And Ted, poor kid. I've always felt sorry for him.
I loved the ending! Great way of adding the Marauders in xDD
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i really liked it! especially the ending>

English is not your first language? No way. I have trouble believing that. You write better than loads and loads of people. This is one of the best stories I've found on this site. And I didn't see any horrible grammatical errors.

But I loved this fic. I like how you really brought out characterizations and told a STORY about PEOPLE. So refreshing. I am going to now search to see if you have written other stories. Because you're that good.

this is a wonderful story. i am so glad to have stumbled upon it.

Confusing end. =)

Aw! I LOVED THIS! It was terribly (in a good way) SWEET AND CUTE! LOVED the ending! Only one thing, which you might know by now. James' (2ND) full names is James Sirius, Teddy's is Teddy Remus, Lily Luna, and i'm sure you know this one, Albus Severus! LOVED IT!

Why is that people who's first language isn't English write better? (I'm pretty sure I might have just proved my own point -sigh-) I love how the Marauders in the photograph can talk to one another. Can they talk to the people? That would be very cool if they could.
I loved the story (I cried just a teeny when Teddy was being so sad).

~Fuzzy~ :3

I love Teddy! And nice touch at the end, too.

Haha! I love your portrayals of all of the characters (specially James II). Your Andromeda seems really appropriate, her pride probably would stretch as far as to not accept help from an outside source. You should write more fics branched from this, :).

I love the end it's so funny.

it was really good!! i would've never known english wasn't your first language if you never said so.

I loved it! You should really write another one! I really enjoyed the ending:)

hehe
I like the bit at the end

Wuff,
This story is fantastic! You have really outdone yourself on this one. Your characterizations are great, especially of Teddy, and he is very age appropriate. Adored James and Albus too! The dialog is very good, as is all of the writing. And the talking marauders in the photo are too cute! I’d love to read more Teddy stories set either before or after this one because this story is so great!
Have I gushed enough or should I keep on going?
I did spot one error in the tense of a word here:
Ted gulped. And sniffed. “Then why…,” he said in a miserable, trembling voice, “then why did he abandon me? Why did he have to fight? I would have rather had cowardice parents who were still alive than brave parents who are dead.”
Cowardice should be cowardly instead.
Colleen