 xWindScarx10 2009-07-07 . chapter 25Sorry, sorry. Anyway, I think this is a great story. Need to fix some spelling errors from early chapters, but very good job establishing Naruto into the Angelic Layer world. I see great things with this story, especially if you do a sequel. Update ASAP, I would like to see more. |
 PEJP Bengtzone 2009-07-03 . chapter 25Well, it's good to see, that you're back with this story. |
 DedeTC 2009-06-29 . chapter 25brilliant chapter
i love the side joke
btw i forgive you |
 Neros Urameshi 2009-06-29 . chapter 25How interesting! Jiraiya teaching the students about all the stuff in the ninja village!
I feel like making a deleted scene here that takes place before, during or after it, showing the debut of an Angelic Layer OC (I will make)... that will be a ninja!
Please continue! This story is getting better and better, and the more better it gets, the more likely it oughta be a movie! XD
Oh, and love the side joke. XD |
 OBSERVER01 2009-06-28 . chapter 25jiraiya as a teacher teaching a normal room of students.scary thought man |
 Ookami Bakura 2009-06-28 . chapter 25XD
ahh...its kinna funny and a bit interesting that the class learned about the Hidden Leaf village X3 |
 ChibiSkitty-donna 2009-06-28 . chapter 25XD Oh man, Kimura is such a card. |
 Elemental Hero Bladedge 2009-06-28 . chapter 25love the humor in this ch. and the students learning about the Elemental Countries. anyways, continue the story aniki.
Ja Ne |
 Yue Twili 2009-06-28 . chapter 25Ah, no worries David! And besides, Jiraiya sure showed everyone about what being a ninja's about! Excellent job there! ^^ Try to update as soon as you can David! |
 Elemental Medadragon God 2009-06-17 . chapter 24Sorry for that but I just forgot. You are doing well I hope to see more. I also like to ask are you going to give more angels to Naruto or him only having one. If you anwser that would be nice. As I said your doing well keep going. |
 PEJP Bengtzone 2009-03-10 . chapter 24Man, if people could've made a Anelic Layer crossover like this, just with Galactik Football, it would've been something.
For further check out of Galactik Football, go to YouTube.
Also, Micro-Ice in Galactik Football is very similar to Naruto, except for the fact he'sn't mostly a main character.
Anyway, good luck, and keep going on!
Otherwise, I'm surprised you didn't chose a name like Kitsuna, Naruko, Naruka, Vixina, or something like that. |
 DedeTC 2009-03-09 . chapter 24fantastic
i like the funny bit with jiraiya's fingers
it seems that icchan and jiraya have a rivalry now i presume
by the way at chapter 23, didn't misaki already know about the three steps a few chapters ago |
 DedeTC 2009-03-09 . chapter 23awsome |
 DedeTC 2009-03-09 . chapter 22very good
i wonder if misaki heard what naruto just said at the end |
 DedeTC 2009-03-08 . chapter 21very good chapter
and i wonder when naruto will confess his feeling to misaki |