Reviews for He'd want me to laugh

Reviews For: He'd want me to laugh

A little bit sonic 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseOh god, I cried. So Sad! I love this, but yes, I sobbed like a small child. Beautiful.
Flag Pole Sittah 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abuseThe scene where Fred died was so sad. I loved both Fred and George and I just cried when he died. So many people died and so many of the survivors were never really seen in the book, I'm glad you brought to light George's reaction. ^^ Quick advice, the story was confusing sometimes because you used too many pronouns. Instead of he, for instance "He was sprinting, but every step seemed harder to take, he couldn’t seem to get any closer to his twin. When he finally reached them his dad reached out and pulled him close, giving him a quick hug before going back to comforting his mom." In this sentence it is not clear who is hugging whom. But other then that it is very good, readable, moveing, thouching, intersting, fanfictionny, and ... don't stop writing!
Padawan Jess Kenobi 2007-08-01 ch 1,	abusethis was gorgeous! I kind of wish that JK Rowling would read this and umm put it in the new Harry Potter book as an addition, because its the perfect response to the death she sort of just skipped over. But seriously, the emotion in this was heart-wrenching... gahh gave me shivers. This part killed me: "He would want me to laugh." :( SO WELL DONE!!
musicalexpert 2007-07-24 ch 1,	abuseYou got me crying, April.
PuckRox 2007-07-23 ch 1,	abusegah, FRED! cries Great fic.
The Mad Writer 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI've got to stop reading these fics, I can't stop crying over Fred too. I really like your perspective on how George may have initially felt knowing that his brother was gone.
rent-serenity 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI couldn't believe he died either. I was heartbroken... Poor George, it's even sadder from his perspective. :(:(:(
Bimefl 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI'm so glad that someone wrote about the effect Fred's death would have on George, because that's all I could think about when he died. I cried, actually, when Fred died. Good job.
Starkiller 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuseGod you captured that perfectly. This was like a missing page from the book. It really annoyed me that JKR kind've skimmed over Fred's death, a character I'd love so much for so many years, and not even taken the time to write George's reaction. I felt she owed us that at least because now it just feels like he's not really gone (man, I'm taking this far too seriously lol). But you finished this scene off perfectly, excellent, heartbreaking work.
Meta Capricorn 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuseJust finished the book and I think you expressed George's feeling very well. It was one of the points in the book where I thought, too, No, this cannot be. Well done! Meta
TheSoulmater 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuseIt may have been quick, but it made me cry! I still can't believe she killed off Fred, not that I didnt think she would just that well these are the TWINS! sob Anyway beautiful ficlette, I think you captured George's response perfectly!

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