 xxpatixx 2009-06-26 . chapter 1ahh that was so good!! ^^ i liked it |
 Asabelle 2008-11-09 . chapter 1 That was funny! LUV it! LOL |
 FQSilencia 2008-10-16 . chapter 1So sweet! by the way, I'm Silencia from Fictionpress! ZUTARA 4 EVER!
gRTZ FQSilencia |
 FireChildSlytherin5 2007-12-22 . chapter 1Okay. That was short and weird. But good. :P hahaha! |
 katinka 2007-10-05 . chapter 1 short but I love it :D its so totally cute! |
 diamondeyes3411 2007-08-25 . chapter 1hahahahahahhahaha thats so funny thats what my friends do...without the kiss |
 MoaningMomoMormon 2007-08-20 . chapter 1I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! THIS IS SO AUSOME! Be Happy
MoaningMomoMormon |
 Klin Potter 23 2007-08-19 . chapter 1Short, BUT TOTALLY AWESOME! |
 Cute_lover 2007-08-05 . chapter 1 AW THIS IS ADORABLE! |
 Unknowen 2007-07-26 . chapter 1 Aaw so cute Zuko acting like a little kid is so cute. |
 Bizerko-Kittykins 2007-07-25 . chapter 1Very cute. But I would have made him only say 'Peasant' and 'Girl' once. Otherwise very cute. I think the thoughts also threw it off but very good, still. And fluffy. |
 kharlye 2007-07-22 . chapter 1 HELLO janie ahahah
:)
this was god for your first story so ya
i think it was good you should write more and more and more and more untill 1 day it can fit into a book and u can write your own book and you have to dedicate it to me you now just because :0 |
 zkjanie 2007-07-22 . chapter 1i love it! |