I liked this story alot, but I was kind of expecting ash and mist to get together and Tracey get his 50 bucks back

I really enjoyed reading your fanfic. I did expect more action to be honest, but the way you portrayed each character was more than enough to keep me interested. I didn't really appreciate the fact that you made Ash such a twit because you didn't like him. But heck, it's your story of course. Anyway you did a great job

Loved it lodes. I adored everything about this fic. Words can't express my deep liking for this great story!

Nicely done!

AF

Wow, I must say I love this story!

It's so hard to find stories with just the Original Characters now a day and with a really good plot line too!

Amazing set up and characterization; can't wait to read more of it!

You know, although I enjoyed the story very much, its weird reading a Pokémon story, with barely any pokémon in it. Onix is mentioned once, and pikachu twice, charmeleon is also mentioned two or three times and that's it.

Pretty weird if you asked me.

Serious pokémon stories are are, and I really enjoyed reading this one.

If you know any other pokémon stories, let me know, because I'll definetely read them!

Wow, this has got to be one of the most amazing and riveting fics I have ever read. You don't often get writers on here that could give even the very best a run for their money. I loved every minute of reading this, even though I am now way behind in my studies as a result, lol.

Just very recently, I found myself looking back on my pokemon days with nostalgia and have been debating whether or not to finally post/update a pokemon fic I wrote when I was younger and stopped working on when I fell out of love with the show (right around the end of the Johto League, like most, but I have since viewed a few hoenn episodes). After reading your fic, I have been given the incentive to work on it once more. Thank you.

Great story. Finaly a story with Misty and Brock together. It would be cool if there was a sequal.

I have to admit, this is one of the most impressive Team Rocket and Ash & Company stories I've ever read. It was long and thorough, which is something I particularly enjoy in fanfiction, because it's really hard to find a story longer than 10,0 words. Not to mention, I found it really unique how you took the time to develop personal character biographies and created unique background stories that all tied into the fic itself. That was really impressive. I'm a diehard Rocketshipper, and just beginning to be a Gymshipper, so this story really impressed me and hit the spot for reading. :) Keep up the great work. I'm currently writing a fic, since it's been ages since anyone's added anything to this community, so hopefully mine will be of interest to you and others as well. :)

I loved this story when I first read it years ago and searched on here for it. Brilliantly written

i loved this story

Yaoi: It's so cruel that it's over. and i have to say that 've been reading since you've updated this year. i found it a good story and found that sometimes i can think of a sequel and encouage the author to write one. unfortinutly i cannot figure out one for this story. forgive me but the only reason i clickedthe link in the begining was because you din't update in years but then you did. i have found a whole bunch of stories that are from way back when that'll neve be updated. back in 2001 or even 20, authors had originality(this story for instance) and nowadays you just don't see that. cliched as crap love stories yes, but no originality.(and yes i am faily new to fanfiction and yes i am ripping myself, the truth needs to be spoken) so thank you for not only reviving this story, but thank you for the adventue and hope that some dy most people will do what you just did.

owarti

Firefly: good,i love you as a author. keep writing.

owarti

Yaoi: wait, no sarcasctic moment

Firefly: no i don't feel like it

Yaoi: wow, that's a first.

Firefly: shut up yaoi-baka

A truly sweet ending to wrap up all the loose ends! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic and am sad that it has ended, though now I can look forward to more works from you.

Had one quick question thought that I was somewhat confused about...

When Tracey had met up with Mariko at the wedding and she left him that gift, he said "A Mariko." Is her name a translation of the flower she left or what? Please explain! Thanks and I look forward to readin more from you!

Haha, Grey Swablu Vodka, freaking hilarious and ingenious! Anyways...I loved this chapter and am truly sad to see that this is the end of it (well, almost anyways) and I actually did think that the fic would go beyond the group simply achieving their goal of reaching the elite, but I suppose that the main point of it all was to reach them and find some sort of resolution for the war. All in all, one of the better fics I have read in a while and I can't wait to see the epilogue. Gratz to you and I hope to you more from you in the future.

...I...I really don't know what to say, but I'll try to say something for the sake of the effort you put into this. I just love your fic; I really do. I was reluctant to try and read this because I thought the worst in thinking it would be similar to the (quite a) few appallingly terrible Pkmn fics I've read before that make me even more ashamed of being a fan. I was also worried because of how long ago it was written. Luckily, I was wrong in doing so. You develop the characters so well that you can actually see them gradually changing throughout the course of the story. I don't really know why, but reading your fic makes me feel different than the other Pkmn fics here. It's just great and will probably become one of my favorite serious Pkmn stories that I'll ever read. I would like to thank you for that. I love all the relationships of your characters and I like how you've gone back and explained things like that. I would also like to tell you that I was overjoyed at how you portrayed Jessie and James' relationship here; it was my favorite of them all. And I'm no die-hard evil R*cketshipper, but I love Jessie and James together here because I love your story. Just know that my point in all this is that it's one of the very few fics I will love that include them together romantically. It's still kind of a strange choice to make James an assassin though. Great, now I'm rambling like you do in your author's notes. Well, I would honestly say more but I've babbled on far too much (and probably wasted far too much of your time) already. This is seriously the longest (not really a) review that I've written and will ever write. I don't know if you're continuing this or whatever your motives are as I've just barely stumbled upon your fic over the weekend and finished it today, but I'll still be just as satisfied with it whatever you do. In the meantime (in between time... Sorry, I was temporarily tempted to sing that song): To be continued...

Okay, so I read this part "Rewrite this top part so that Misty brings him around the corner..." and was kinda like what the hell until I realized that you probably forgot to delete your personal notes before adding the story lol! Regardless, this chapter was awesome! I think my all around favorite part was when Gary was teasing the trio and quoting things Tracey had once said. Hilarious! I am starting to like Gary more and more as the story progresses and I thank you for that. I really wanted to start liking him more than the anime had given him credit for and this just helps me a bit.

Anyways, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!