I LOVE IT!

Oh no, so sad! Make them happy again.

Wow, I almost started crying myself. Great job with this!

I love this so much, you did a terrific job! Poor cloud... looks like there needs to be... A THREESOME! WOO! lol. jp. Really good job.

That was gorgeous ;;

I'm normally not a fan of angsty ZxC but... shit. That was really well done; great emotion and such :3

wow, really good, and sad... but the last line didn't make sense to me. I would love to see another chapter of this.

...Wow. So well written...and deep...and emotionally heartbreaking. I'm almost afraid to read the sequel...

ah! more! i want to read more!

Wow, I really like this. I am actually considering writing a story along these lines, where Zack leaves Cloud for Seph, but Cloud gets pissed and just dissappears. Then comes back some time later and Zack is alone (Seph having left him) and realizes what he gave up in Cloud. I don't know, but I really loved this.

Aww, that was amazing! ;_;

Basically it was perfect. I can't even think of anything else to say.