 Scarlet Angel16 4/8/04 . chapter 18This is a really great way to end this story. I've enjoyed reading it. |
 Account Dead 7/18/02 . chapter 18Renee I thought this story was really good I never realized Amie n Vegeta a couple but the way you intorduced her fustrations out was great how u evntually made her aggresive Good jobe I enjoyed it bye bye |
 Crystal Dragon6 5/28/02 . chapter 18That was pretty good. Amy has a bit too many mood swing, but I still like it. I really liked the part where Vegeta is obsessed with towels, lol! Keep up the good work. |
 Sarah 5/24/02 . chapter 18 It was cute. I liked it. Oh gotta go. people here. |
 BluLadyK 5/15/02 . chapter 18Good job. I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading your other works. Another fic another time, ja! |
 The Summer Winds 5/15/02 . chapter 18Ahhh! I love it! You did an excellant job on this story, completely AWESOME! |
 BluLadyK 5/13/02 . chapter 17Awww! It is no problem reviewing good fics like this. Everyone needs help at some point and I'm glad that I could be there to help you. This chapter was much better with the POV's thanks! How many more chapters do you intend to do for this? Is there going to be more romantic flashbacks? ::hint hint wink wink:: Well, I guess that's all that I need to say this chapter. Till the next one, ja ne! |
 Sporanox 5/13/02 . chapter 17If this is your ending to the story, then I mus say this has been a great read. I actually thought it would surpass The Hunt For Goku in reviews, it deserves more than this. Just a few pointers though:
1: The Eternal Dragon can't kill people. It's bad for his karma.
2: It is beyond the Porunga's power to grant more than one person per wish back to life. He's not being stingy or anything.
Anyways, that's my two cents. Gotta go!
-Sporanox |
 Sweet Revolution 5/9/02 . chapter 16Oh! I love this story! I like how you make Ami have so much in common with Vegeta! Great job!
Baby Kakarott |
 BluLadyK 4/26/02 . chapter 16Good chapter except for one tiny thing that's bothering me. I can't really tell who is talking when it's in first person. Maybe before the paragraph or everytime it changes do something like ***Gohan POV*** or something like that. It will just make it less confusing. Thanks! Till the next chapter, ja ne! |
 Cairila 4/26/02 . chapter 16 this is great I really like this story. Ami is so cool in it and Vegeta is his usual loveable self |
 BluLadyK 4/10/02 . chapter 15I liked these last two chapters. Pretty interesting, although the timeline is pretty screwed up. But hey, ::shrugs:: its all good! Can't wait for the next chapter, till then, ja ne! |
 Sporanox 4/10/02 . chapter 15Hey there, just wanted to tell you that this is one of the best fics in the DBZ/SM section. Ami and Vegeta ROCK! Ya got the power levels straight, and I love Bulma bashing, sometimes she can be really annoying. Continue as SOON as you can! |
 DBZ4LiFe 3/20/02 . chapter 1 to "ok",you think its sickening how some dumb scout has no respect for sm?I'll let you know 95% of you authors disrespect DBZ,pathetically degrading them to sm level,twisting with their power and character,taking them for granted, using them as a way to make under dressed highschool girls look good...Its absolutely pitiful...If your gonna complain bout something,complain about how biased this section is and how moonies are idiots...It's really unfair to DBZ...and that's all I had to say about that... |
 BluLadyK 3/20/02 . chapter 13Another chapter! Yea! I enjoyed it and look foward to the next one. Well, I guess that's all that I need to say. Till the next chapter ja ne! |