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FantasyFanatic613
2009-11-29 . chapter 8
I wasn't originally going to read this story, as it's a Discworld crossover and I've never read Discworld. But my sister, who's read both Discworld and this fic, told me that this is basically Harry Potter with just a little bit of Discworld thrown in, so I decided to give it a try.

And I'm glad I did. This story is beautiful. Everything was just so...touching!

Just a snippet from chapter 3 that struck me as quite funny: "The Guard gazed at him blankly for a moment or two – he was good at blank looks – before glancing down at the cat in his arms. NO. He said carefully, in a voice usually used for speaking to the very slow and very stupid. IT’S A CAT. I LIKE CATS."

I absolutely loved the chapter about Andromeda and Bellatrix - the lost memories was a great explanation for how she could be so cruel.

Regulus's chapter was also brilliant. I was waiting for him to figure out himself that he could board with Kreacher, but I like the way you had the Guard push him in instead. Sometimes we can't do things by ourselves, and we need someone else to give us a tiny push in the right direction - literally in this case!

Salazar's character was well done - I like the way he's teasing and a little bit on the mean side, as befits a Slytherin...but not bad.

Helena's chapter was great. Miss Susan's class was quite amusing! (I would have probably liked it even more if I'd read Discworld, since I was a bit confused about that. Oh well.) And that ending was absolutely perfect.

All in all, this was a marvelous story. It was put together so well. I could only ever dream of being able to write something like this. Great, great job!
Winter's Light
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
This was a fantastic read! I nearly bawled. Loved it!
Taly-chan
2009-11-25 . chapter 3
That was a great concept :D Goes well with Lily raveling twice so to speak.
By the way, Peter dies before Lupin, so there is no reason for the Marauders to wait, although it could be he never got to that particular station. Downwards with the rat I'd say.
Taly-chan
2009-11-25 . chapter 1
Wow, that was amazing. Extra points for Fred waiting and for the last paragraph. I loved it.
Silvereyed Queen
2009-11-24 . chapter 2
WAH! This chapter makes me cry!
sierra's scarlet
2009-11-23 . chapter 8
Very well done. I've read train stories before, but this was something above those. Great job.
sierra's scarlet
2009-11-22 . chapter 6
Yay! There's nothing wrong if a mutual love is between two species - if that's all they have to get them on the train, it's enough
sierra's scarlet
2009-11-22 . chapter 4
this story is wonderful... I was going to wait till the end to review, but what you did with Peter was beautiful... redemption. Don't we all need it?
The Wakka Man
2009-11-10 . chapter 8
Aw, this was a nice chapter. Plus Susan and her class enter the story which can't be anything but good :)
Mycroft R Holmes
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
This story is sublimely beautiful.
The Wakka Man
2009-11-04 . chapter 1
Oh. Oh MY.

It took me a few minutes but then the pieces clicked.

The readhead... and Hedwig's cage...

WOW.
tempralanomaly
2009-11-02 . chapter 8
One of the best series of one shots I've ever seen. Please keep up the excellent work
dundee998
2009-10-27 . chapter 8
You horrible person, how dare you make me laugh and cry so much in only eight chapters. I-I-I think I need to keep this one. When I want to think about mothers and forgiveness. Thank you for a beautiful collection of stories.
dundee998
2009-10-27 . chapter 4
Damn you, you made me cry. You've taken the most despicable character in the entire series, and found out WHY we hate him-cause we all have him in the dark corners of our minds. Cripes.
Kurisuten-chan
2009-10-26 . chapter 1
You're an amazing writer. The first chapter made me cry! Poor Fred and George! DX
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