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| Lord Sia 2008-09-07 ch 1, | abuseWell, ** me sideways... Or is that Sasuke being ** sideways? Well, someones gonna be ** up good, that's for sure. The problem with regenerators is that they still feel pain. Riddick, well, he isn't and he still dislocated his shoulders to get away from a pole he was chained to- Somehow I don't think that Naruto will pay a lot of attention to small stuff anymore, like, bruises, cuts, scrapes, stabwounds, third-degree burns, hacked off limbs... You know, flesh wounds. |
| seth 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease for the love of allthing holy and unholy finish the story. |
| Metal Dragoon 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI seriously hope that you continue this story in the near future for several reasons. A: Riddick is a badass, and in conjunction with the Naruto-verse his badassery will reach LEGENDARY levels. B: Picture Riddick able to use jutsus. Now picture him able to summon something along the lines of the Repti-cats from Chronicles of Riddick. Not to mention the effect he's gonna have on the Hyuuga. The body count's gonna be HUGE if they try to put the caged bird seal on this fella! And maybe, just maybe, he could help a certain shy little Heiress confront her feelings and act on them. (Yes, I'm a shameless NaruHina shipper, so sue me.) |
| Sdarian 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseNaruto, trained by Riddick, aided by chakra techniques, and although he wouldn't really need it, enhanced by Kyuubi chakra at the Valley of the End. Pure awesome. I hope to see more of this, cause it's sure to be great! Keep up the good work! |
| Cassie 2008-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethis sounds like a very interesting story please update it |
| Spaceman 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseCool Story Idea. I hope you write more, because there are not enough good Riddick crossovers! He proved he was a badass animated with Dark Fury and I can picture him in any fighting anime/manga or any fic you need a badass teacher/father. If your looking for help I offer you read "Lessons of Experience" by BukkakeNoJutsu, another badass knive-weilder. When I first read it, I could picture San as Riddick ancestor. |
| the music lady 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abusei can't even imagine where you'd go with this, but if you ever get an inspiration for it, i can't wait to read it! :D |
| phoenix's shadow 2007-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh this sounds so good i love Riddick,Have him kill someone with a tea cup! hehehe oh i was reading your other fc wild charry blossem or somrthing like that and thats good too needs to be updateed same as this one too! |
| A Apple 2007-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseHave him kill someone with a cup. |
| Lord Aries Greymon 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseThis definitely needs continuing. Not sure how you'd pull it off though. |
| Canis Black 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI'd love to see this story continued. |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. If your other works are even close to the originality of this and Wild Cherry Blossom, you've definitely earned a place on my favorites list. Almost anyone can write a long story, but it takes rare people like you to come up with a good concept to base it on. :) |
| yellulhchicken 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abusean xover with riddic sounds good but how did he get there? ar you equating furuions with the hyuga? riddic does not have 360 degree vision, neither does he have x ray vision. based on the movie he is a tactical genius, has eidetic memory, his eyes can tract high speed movements(more of an uchiha??), relatively strong and has impresive endurance (naruto level?). the only advantage his eyes have is that he sees in oulraviolet(which is the reason for the goggles). I don't remember riddic being high on 'honor' though. based on the movies i saw (pitch black, chronicles of riddic and that cartoon verison) he is ... wel... his yes is yes and his no is no and he keeps his promises. still pretty interesting. |
| Fury 2007-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, I've never even seen any of the movies about Riddick, yet as soon as you said he was bald he was the first person I thought of. Weird huh? Anyway, I like it so far, it's definitly different. |
| Dragonmage 2007-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseW00P! Now that is a new twist on the old "Trained-by-Someone Else" plot. And instead of learning some new badass-jutsu-of-total-owning (heavy sarcasm detected) Riddick would teach him only two important lessons that the typical Naruto never learns: how to win at all costs and how to survive in every situation! PLEASE! For the love of all good ideas, do not abbandon this! Continue it as fast as you feel comfortable doing without dropping quality and take as much time as you need to supply your muse with new twists for you to write. And let no annoying nagging ** who never wrote a decent story him/her/itself destroy your fun of writing. |