wow very well written.

omg thats so sad! really really really sad!

You're mean, and that's sad.

I can't believe so much tragedy happened. I'm really glad that she's got someone like Nick and Sara to love her though.

I'm so so so sad though.

Thanks for writing this for me. I love it!

(I'll let you keep going if you want... I mean, if you want it to be a chapter fic.)

Ok, usually I wouldn't say much to this, but I have to tell you that this story is un-godly depressing. . it's like almost like Hamlet, expect for the fact Cath, Nick, War and Sara all live. Was there a reason you made this so depressing or was it just the way it came to you?