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| mabelreid 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuse“There’s no way they had technical advisors working on the set. I mean, look at the way she’s holding that gun! Any of you ever done that when you’ve drawn at a scene?” Danny scoffed. that was a great opening and so true about cop shows. You did a good job on this one showing the easy way they have with one another and the first I love you's weren't overdone or overly romantic, just natural everyday life. Love it. |
| KTmac09 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love the side of Danny that you had written in this story, so realistic ... very Danny. We all know he's a mushy romantic deep down, probably more than Lindsay is. ;] Also not to mention that this gave me warm tingles! (I'm such a dork, I know.) Perfect and brilliant writing as always! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseAwe! They love eachother... This was so realistic... Loved it... JENNIFER |
| RockinLizzy 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseAwh, playful banter. How sweet. It's nice how you included the whole gang. :D |
| daytimedrama 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseOkay I can't write a really brillant review because I'm too busy, smiling and giggling. SO SO sweet. I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to see this in the show. As usually your characters are spot on fun, and flirty. yay! |
| ReJo 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! I really like the way they're kind of dancing around each other, but Danny is the one who really wants to put it all out there - they're in love! |
| GRACE5 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseagain i totally loved it. |