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Reviews For: Pizza, Beer and Love

mabelreid
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuse“There’s no way they had technical advisors working on the set. I mean, look at the way she’s holding that gun! Any of you ever done that when you’ve drawn at a scene?” Danny scoffed.

that was a great opening and so true about cop shows. You did a good job on this one showing the easy way they have with one another and the first I love you's weren't overdone or overly romantic, just natural everyday life. Love it.
KTmac09
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love the side of Danny that you had written in this story, so realistic ... very Danny. We all know he's a mushy romantic deep down, probably more than Lindsay is. ;] Also not to mention that this gave me warm tingles! (I'm such a dork, I know.)

Perfect and brilliant writing as always!
JennCorinthos
2007-07-25
ch 1,
abuseAwe! They love eachother... This was so realistic... Loved it...

JENNIFER
RockinLizzy
2007-07-23
ch 1,
abuseAwh, playful banter. How sweet. It's nice how you included the whole gang. :D
daytimedrama
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseOkay I can't write a really brillant review because I'm too busy, smiling and giggling. SO SO sweet. I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to see this in the show. As usually your characters are spot on fun, and flirty. yay!
ReJo
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant! I really like the way they're kind of dancing around each other, but Danny is the one who really wants to put it all out there - they're in love!
GRACE5
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseagain i totally loved it.
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