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| mabelreid 2007-08-05 ch 1,  | abuse“Right. I hear ya. Wow, look at the time. I’m pretty sure there’s someone out there committing an indictable offence. See ya!” Great line and I really did Laugh out loud. I love it that Lindsay presented her case like she was a defense attorney on trial. that was too funny. “Twins?” Danny glanced up and Lindsay spun on her heels, both shocked to find Mac standing there, his expression betraying his belief that his ears had just deceived him. “Uh, okay, that I might’ve told him,” Danny muttered. Great ending |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseTWINS! Oh man... I loved this... I love a hormonal Lindsay... MOre please... JENNIFER |
| keotla 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuse"Wow, look at the time. I’m pretty sure there’s someone out there committing an indictable offence. See ya!" What a GREAT line... made me giggle for ages! I'm loving this err... series, i guess. It's great! Keep going :) |
| ReJo 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseCute! |
| RockinLizzy 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseRest assured, this one is just as good as your first couple. Again with the great characters, especially Lindsey with the studies on pregnant women working. And the ending was hilarious. The mental of Mac's facial expression is priceless. :D |
| daytimedrama 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abusepish posh, we are not getting weary, well I'm not! I just think I'm the only crazy person who has to take breaks from Harry Potter to check to see if CSI NY fan fics have been updated. SO cute! I love how Lindsay realized that Mac already knew. more more more! |