Wah, I just realized that you haven't updated this in six years! Hahaha.

Anyways, I like your writing style... it doesn't sacrifice detail or dialogue, but still manages to have something of a "modern" tint to it.

Keep writing... ! (In general.)

It's good that Van is so drawn to Hitomi, but be careful not to rush things... for example, a line that really struck me in this chapter was "How could a simple two-lettered word make such an insult?" However, the sentence following it seems a little much... ? It's a little hard for me to believe that Van would want to strangle Merle just at that one innocent comment... so soon after meeting Hitomi.

Overall, though, I'm not criticizing the speed of the fic. It's probably necessary that Van be intrigued by Hitomi early on. :)

Hmm, interesting chapter. I like the fact that you went through the trouble of inventing a new language, hahaha :p And yes, I visited your website. I can't believe you animated Escaflowne, too!

Whoa! This is an original plotline if I've ever seen one. And the writing is great so far... definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

oh my gosh!

i know you haven't updated a long time but...

i really like your fic so i was hoping that maybe you can add more chapter or even finish this fic...

ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE? UPDATE!

Are you every going to update this story? Please do so.

Hey you update the story! PLEASE do so. Finish what you started. I'm going to bug you

Please finish this story. I like it. I wrote you a couple of manths ago. Please finish.

Very intrigueing. I can't wait till you write another chapter. This is very unique and I like the way you have put it together. I appreciate the way you explained things in the first chapter so as to avoid confusion very well done. I hope your muse helps you continue this fic and UFN also, I really like both of them. Please write more! Arwyn give her more inspiration, please please! *begging on hands and knees* *giving puppy dog eyes*

Hey! This is a great story, are you ever going to continue it? Please do! You're not dead or anything, are you? Please, PLEASE continue this story, it's unique and really cool! Oh, is Escaflowne armed? Update soon! Please!

Why did you stop. Please Continue this. Very interesting. Finish what you started please

This is a nice story. Are you going to up-date soon?

You haven't updated for a little over a year. Don't you think that maybe, just maybe, that you should update it soon? PLEASE!

luv this idea! plz chappie 5!

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