I liked this! It was a little confusing, but it was definitely enjoyable. :D Keep it up!

I thought that the style was actually really interesting. n.n Liked the story, too.

oh wow. This was awesome.
I liked he bold line, how you changed it from Alchemy to Teachings. It was cool that Mustang protcted Ed and as long as he's alive, I don't really care. Loved it.

great mustang dialogue. just like when he burnt his wounds in the manga and he was worrying about hawkeye and havoc xD nice job.

Verry good story! I loved it! Also the format was verry good, I liked it! ^-^ Thanks for writing!

WHAT? I've never left a review? I've read this like a million times.

Obviously I enjoyed the story. You did a great job in the telling of it and I liked the style. I certainly hope that one day you might write sequel to this. That would rock. Or just write anther awesome story like this one?

I need to go and check to see what else you've posted up here!

You rock and so does your story!

Sg

so brilliantly done again! No, the writing without quotations didn't really confuse me too much, i got use to it lol XD

i thought you were going to kill mustang i was going to be sad...

i wish you'd do a sequel to this. i really loved it. and as much as roy teases ed, he would do that without a second thought. at least that's what i think.

Nice, how you incorporated the confusion into the writing, it's all like 'whoa what's happening'
I feel mad at those people standing around. Couldn't they find a way to help instead of standing around at the scene? And what's worse is that I would understand them, I wouldn't know what to do either...

cool. cookies for you.

Good story - not having the quotation marks is really effective!

Oh My Gosh!
That was so confusing. In a good way. It was confusing the way having someone you care about dying or coming close to dying is always confusing. I sure felt that way when multiple elderly relatives kicked the bucket in one year, with the lack of quotation marks and all.
Keep writing! =)

Aww, cute and in-character. Not much more that you can ask for in a fic. :D Good job.

i really realy loved this and i think the lack of quotation marks made it really work and help it flow together more.

fma.angle xoxo