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2007-07-23
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. It's not the rubbish I write (take a look at my hp stories! REVIEW!)

Tonks shoulda said, "Wotcher, Harry."
I have no idea what that means. BYE!
Cuban Sombrero Gal
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseAww ... thanks for the cookies!

This is great, all the dead *sobs* people are totally in character. Brilliant!

Cuba
Secca Irises
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful.

Man, I was sobbing at that part of the story... Especially when Sirius spoke...

The first person view was a tad bit annoying, but good none-the-less.
Olivia
2007-07-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseman that was beautiful...made me cry again after reading the book hahaha
whimsy007
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseI thought you did a pretty good job of keeping the feel of that chapter while expanding the group, but two things threw me off while reading this. One was a minor mistake in voice. Dobby didn't sound right. In the books I don't think he ever addressed Harry as "Mr. Potter", but always as "Harry Potter". A more overt mistake was with Tonks. Harry already knew she was dead. He saw her and Remus lying together next to Fred in the Great Hall.
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