Ugh, I can't understand why some great fics like this one doesn't have so many reviews :/

I enjoyed that. You're a great writer!~ :D

Like the others said - wow! This is great! Man, I wish I could write as well as you >

Wow. This is good. I mean, really good. This could be published, seriously. This is better than some books I've read. I love it; please keep writing. It'll be awesome if you add more!

Beautifully written! in an elegant, flowing poetic style which truly captures the emotions and personalities of the characters in Odin Sphere. Your attention to detail, such as Gwendolyn’s and Oswald’s fleeting flickers of doubt during intense battle (and the “fluttering” in their hearts XD), as well as your depictions of the character’s reactions and thoughts add a depth to them that I had not originally thought of, and because of this elaboration, helped me appreciate that one cut-scene in the game more.

In addition to that, your erudite and authoritative grasp of the main events in the game’s complex plot as well as your skilful command of literary techniques, grammar, and vocabulary makes this story an easy favorite.

A superb job, and I certainly hope to read more of your work!

wow. that's all i have to say. wow... this very beautifully written and i couldn't have done it better myself... you really captured the characters! i believe you are on the DA as well x)) i saw it there ironically enough O~o...

Wow!
This is really well written!
You capture Gwen perfectly in this chapter. It's like an inside look into her innermost thoughts.
I can't wait to see what you do with Oswald.
I'll await your next chapter with baited breath.
~Good luck!

Wow. This is beautiful. Good job!