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Sayuri-hime
2009-11-29 . chapter 5
I just started reading your story today and I think its amazing! I absolutely love it. Please update soon.
kate
2009-10-27 . chapter 5
UPDATE! I love this so far!
nwyd
2009-10-11 . chapter 5
so awesome!! please update soon!
blackraven615
2009-04-26 . chapter 5
Ah! That was beautiful. I am so happy that you have updated and hope that you can do it again soon. I was reading this on my blackberry during a code red practice a couple of days back and it kept me thoroughly entertained. =]
HikariYamino
2009-04-19 . chapter 5
Hinata is stronger in here and sasuke less of a jerk, which is good. I love it dude! Keep up the good work!!
Lone Silver Angel
2009-04-13 . chapter 5
Aa~ You write so well! I really enjoyed reading it. The plot is interesting too! Please update soon!
Haruka2007
2009-04-12 . chapter 5
still love the story and love the new chap :)

good luck with the applications to university :)
winterkaguya
2009-04-09 . chapter 5
Oh finally!! An update!! *grins* Ah well, on with the review...

I like their chance meeting, although it was brief, but one could not help but feel that there's a red string tied to their fingers...I also like the detailed description about Hinata's paintings and the various symbolism used like how Sasuke noted the paintings, they are morbid yet dramatic, its like how Hinata coloured her life on it...

Nice chapter...I hope you'll update soon!
deception-M
2009-04-09 . chapter 5
It's been so long since an update I assumed that you had abandoned this story, but I'm so happy that you didn't!
Love that they're finally speaking to each other!

Good luck with your uni hunt too.
Hope to see another chapter soon as well!
deception-M
2008-08-19 . chapter 4
new reader here, and loved what i've read so far.
can't wait to see what happens next!!
blackraven615
2008-07-28 . chapter 4
I am really enjoying this story. You made me curious of what the drawing is. Update soon please. I can't wait for Sasuke and Hinata to meet formally.
TarynCasey
2008-07-28 . chapter 4
I'm really enjoying this story. It's beautiful in it's simplicity. It is refreshing to read something more mature than the usual stories on this site (I'm refering to the fics all 12 year olds love to write). I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
stphne
2008-07-21 . chapter 4
Just a few things, mainly spelling (I think you spelled practice wrong in the fourth chapter), and maybe not use "whilst" so much. A simple "while" would do just fine, though I'm not saying to get rid of the "whilst". It gives it an odd flair.

Good luck on the rest of the chapters! I'll be waiting to read more!
madteen66
2008-07-21 . chapter 4
god i hope Hanabi an Konohamaru have a thing XD!!
breenarose
2008-07-20 . chapter 4
Will Naruto tease Konohamaru about talking to a pretty young girl (aka Hanabi)? It's kind of sad that Hinata and Sasuke don't actually know each others' names yet. I like how you have Hinata with a taste for tomatoes.
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