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buff802y
2009-11-11 . chapter 8
I just finished reading your story. Absolutely I fell in love with James. I love that he was so responsible and forward with Hermione. I love that he felt close enough to her to approach her about this relationship. Loved the bluntness of Albus as well.
Would love to see a sequel from James perspective and have it include all the characters...especially my favorite HHr.
Great job and look forward to more of your stories:)
Wotcher-Tonks
2009-11-07 . chapter 8
only h/hr ive ever read that completely won me over. bravo.
fantastic work.
found it through a c2. am adding it to mine as well.
aBIGfan
2009-11-04 . chapter 8
this was great. i loved your characterization of the potter children, especially Al and James. and the last line was perfect. Yay, that means a Harmony baby :)
Iamscientist
2009-11-03 . chapter 8
Another fantastic tale. Your style is outstanding and it makes me feel so involved with the characters thougts and feelings. Thank you for sharing this with us. I would love to see you complete some of your older stories as well. x
Ambre95
2009-11-03 . chapter 8
OK! Where do I begin?!

Your story is...

Amazing, brilliant, fantastic, breathtaking, beautiful, full of emotion, perfect, stunning, great and flawless!

And I mean every single word of it!

When I read the first chapter, I actually thought it was a one shot and I was depressed by the frustrating end! Forbidden love... Two tortured soulmates who cannot be together... It made me quite sad, especially the way you tell the story and describe their passionate feelings!

Imagine my joy when I discovered that it wasn't over yet! There was still hope for Harry and Hermione, Yay!

Right now, I've just finished reading this fanfiction and I am extremely happy and glad that you decided to give them a happy ending!

I loved every second, every single moment, all the overwhelming emotion, all the feelings, the depth of the characters, everything in this story, that you generously shared with us!

And I have to say that if you ever write anything again, contact me! It is an order!

Just kidding about the order part, but do mail me if you ever start another fanfiction! It has been such a pleasure reading this one!

You are a fantastic writer with an amazing style and an extraordinary ability to make your faithful readers hang upon every single word, moment or feeling you describe!

That said, I'll stop bothering you, for now!

Sincerely yours!

Mary.

PS : When I think that I usually HATE romance stories... (cough![Twilight]cough!)
I just hadn't read the right ones (like yours)!!
BunnyLovesYouu.'
2009-11-01 . chapter 8
I can't believe this story is finished :D I loved every minute, second, I read this & it's one of my favorite stories (:
Lyta23
2009-11-01 . chapter 8
Have been waiting so long, Thank you for finishing. I love it.
shiro-wolfman-k
2009-11-01 . chapter 8
thank you for writting this.

Really, thank you.
Nami-007
2009-10-31 . chapter 8
It is a wonderful story. For me, this is the true end of Harry Potter series.
Thanks for finish it, and sharing this fanfic with us.

Hope I read more of you.

Best wishes,
Nami
Alarice
2009-10-30 . chapter 8
I really liked your story. After the two first chapters it got really well-written and eloquent, which I think "Harry" "said" something about as well (it was you writing his thoughts, thats why I put it in these ""). The first two chapters, though, were not so good, I don't know, maybe you wrote less eloquent on purpose to portray younger people? But they were also very repetetive - Harry would use the same words in his chapter as Hermione did in hers, for instance about that Weasley clock. But the rest of the story was very good - I liked the personalities, especially those of the children. Your story was mostly not happy, which made me somewhat reluctant to read on, so it was a good thing you kept assuring us (the readers) that there would be a happy ending. Keep on writing, and now I'm off to read the rest of the stories in your 'Stupidverse' as you called it.
--Ally
LeoHiggins
2009-10-30 . chapter 8
Bravo! Job well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. A masterpiece of standards which budding writers can aspire to reach.

The plot's well thought and planned without digressing from canon and cumulates realistic reactions of the characters. The writing is definately one of high quality.

Once again, great work. I look forward to read more of such quality.
A. Pikachu
2009-10-30 . chapter 8
And it is done.

A favorite, definitely. A very realistic approach to Harry and Hermione, following canon, and definitely one of the best HHR reads around. Thank you so much for writing and finishing this.

I love the way you write the both of them. I believe I've said this previously, but I just have to say this again. I, in this chapter, especially enjoyed Harry's perspective (the 'Hoo boy did I just have man-thoughts' line got me laughing out loud). I really like how you write them to be so in love and be perpetually in love - they seem to just love each other so much, and I felt that throughout the chapter. You've given me more proof (I hope what I say makes sense) that HHR is the ship to support. HAHAHA.

The imagery, too, is well-written.

With that said, I also think that how you write them is very entertaining. I wish to see more HHR from you, if that is possible, hence me putting you in my Author Alerts.

Happy trails~ : )

A.P.
badkidoh
2009-10-30 . chapter 8
it' a great ending.
Fibinaci
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
This is amongst the best in the whole "Harry and Hermione have jungle fever post epilogue" genre. I loved all of the kids mixed reactions, and the bit where Hermione discovers that she thinks of Ginny as a former friend.
cajuncoffee
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
So glad you finished my favorite HP fic. I can't get over the detail and realism of H's and Hr's perspectives. Well done!
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