I read Agape, and I was a little dejected to find that it seemed to end. This was nice- gave a little more insight to an already fabulous story.
And I LOVE SIA. Breathe me is my favourite song, I always write to it.
best wishes,
Jess
xx

Can't believe that I somehow missed this little side-story. It stands alone quite well, seeing as how Agape is only from Vincent's PoV, though it could have been implemented within the story just as easily.

Maybe I'm getting lazy, or perhaps I simply hate repeating myself, but again, another amazing piece of literature. Enough said lol.

So beautiful. ;_;

I love your rhythm. I just get caught up so easily in your writing. I smiled right when I was reading the scene where the first guy persists and asks the bartender for a pen. And, when Tifa's listening to the voicemail, can't help but hold my breath with her. There's also something about saying "I love you" to that person that really gets to me... in general and over the phone - because of a memory of mine and just because. I feel perfectly warmed and content with this. Thank you. {heart}

Jess 0:o)

Lovely!

aww! that's cute! i agree, stage freight is a good line! ^_^

Ah, this is so nice. I'm glad I knew to read this after reading chapter 17. Now I am feeling better about how things will go in the rest of the story.
mar

Oops! Somehow I missed your update. That was really awesome. Totally sucked me in, really got me going near the end. Little misty-eyed. Wonderfully, beautifully written. Never fails, I just really enjoy reading your work. I wish there were more that I could do for the writers that I enjoy reading than just leave a review, there's so much time and effort that goes into your stories. Anyways, I really appreciate the opportunity that you afford me to read something truly entertaining and full of talent.

It's really a wonderful thing to have that realization that, even though you could have anyone else, all you ever needed, all that was ever important, is already yours. This story made me feel that so well; just totally wonderful. Seeing Tifa go through the stages of her experience in her own mind and come to the conclusion on her own to be with Vincent, just brilliant, I really loved it.

Hey Dark,

I have to warn you that it's 1 am here (which for me is late; I assume that it's a matter of course for you -wink-).

I enjoyed this. I felt that the space in the middle where you described all of Tifa's potential beaus dragged a wee bit (but I'm very tired and that might be colouring my perception). It's nice how you managed to write a more-or-less stand alone fic from a multichaptered one though. That takes a certain amount of skill; how to say enough without saying too much.

Favourite parts? Vincent's little chuckle on the phone. I -loved- that line. 'Stage fright'. That just seems so ... cute and Vincent at the same time. I always enjoy how you add a bit of a human dimension to him. He needs it, I think.

The little I love you made my heart sing a wee bit but I'm secretly a sap. Secretly. -wink-.

It felt ... when Tifa was crying and she said 'love you' too ... you somehow managed to put in that ineffable emotion that you can have when you say I love you and -mean it- to a person. It's a big, all encompassing emotion ... and you somehow got us to feel a bit of that by those two exchanging words -without- the narrator adding description. It's probably why I think that the end of the story was the very best part.

Plus, Yuffie was hitting on the cute bartender. How could I not love that? -grin-

Alright, I need bed or something like it. Lovely as always,

-T. pirate

absolutely brilliant!
luved it.
keep up the good work!

It was nice getting to see Tifa's thoughts and feelings on the budding relationship with Vincent. It just helps put their relationship in a little more perspective for me. Also since Tifa's feelings are clearer, it kind of makes me more anxious to see them take another step in their relationship. Good chapter/stand-alone.

^_^

wow, fantastic! tifa's pov is really impressive. you've captured The Moment perfectly for these characters. this is a wonderful companion piece to agape, and just a lovely thoughtful story to read.

WOO! Sweet sweet Vincent Tifa goodness. I really really loved this, it was a fun read from beginning to end. Oh and Stage fright is a great line.