Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Search
Reviews for: Obedience Training
Hotaru-Naichingeru 9/10/11 . chapter 1
Hayate! Don't piss on the floor!
Marguerite Lily 10/26/10 . chapter 1
Hello Nita-chan Awwh, this one-shot fic was indeed adorable and it sure was a fun read. Black Hayate was really so kawaii. And oh, it was hilarious especially when the poor dog thought at first that he was the one at the receiving end of Riza's wrath, lol, well good thing coz obviously, it wasn't him but Roy Mustang though I can say that Riza and Roy's encounter ended up very nicely, lol and it's really great that once in a while, Riza was the one in total control. And so I guess Black Hayate could relax for now, lol.. All in all, I simply love this wonderful fic. Great job so keep it up! Thank you and take care Nita-chan :D
StarvingLunatic 9/13/07 . chapter 1
LOL! Quite amusing little tale. Riza needs like anger management or something considering how quick she is on the draw. It is quite nice to see her putting Roy in his place, though. Roy's reaction to Riza was great too. And, the best part of it all, Black Hayate getting away with things! Not just getting away with things, but getting a treat while getting away. Way to go Black Hayate! Great work as usual. Hasta...
Rinbins 9/6/07 . chapter 1
Aha, domineering Riza. I can so see that.

And yay, I just love the interaction between Riza and Black Hayate! It's so cute.
Zade 7/26/07 . chapter 1
Bwa-ha-ha-ha! That was awesome! Thanks much for a light bit of R/R fluff! I liked it very, very much! I can totally see Riza 'out-ranking' Roy in her own home! LOL.

-Z
peace 7/24/07 . chapter 1
update forbidden for me and everyone ,please ,pretty please.
OTP 7/23/07 . chapter 1
lol bad dogs indeed she has to train em both lol nice job
Return to Top