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Reviews for: Asch's Big Advuntere: FInal ChaPter
super sailor vegeta-sei 6/12/09 . chapter 1
Congradualations! Your writing is a terrible mess. Even the a professional team of editors who earned at Harvard cannot clean it properly.
Demented Hacker 7/24/07 . chapter 1
The English has improved somewhat, though there are still issues, particularly names. There is a plot, which has now been tied up. The characters now seem a bit more like what they should be.

Well, it's an improvement, at least.
DFGA's Pooter 7/23/07 . chapter 1
da ws awsmeo/.?SHIFT!1

Great job! xD
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