 AndJustForgetTheWorld 2009-06-24 . chapter 2Version 2 was very sweet,but Version 1 was kinda more personal if you get what I mean. |
 Zeph the Mage 2009-05-05 . chapter 1I love this story - it was so cute!
However, one minor notation. In certain parts, I notcied how you used the wrong word or tense, such as where "me" should've been "my", and ect. Besides that, it had no mistakes - the areas I did spot were extremely minor and unnoticeable.
None the less, adorable short-story.
=3 |
 Temptation of Lacuna 2009-04-07 . chapter 2I loved it! It was amusing, cute, and most importantly touching. I'm at a loss for words... |
 Peace of the Moon 2009-03-08 . chapter 2I like the second version better. Very nice, by the way. |
 Lady.Zayriah 2008-11-09 . chapter 1Eek!! Adorable!! |
 fantasymask 2008-09-09 . chapter 1This is a very nice rewritten oneshot! |
 Sapphia 2008-09-01 . chapter 2:) Love it! I personaly like the Rewrite better because I think it has more detail. Good job! |
 la generala 2008-08-27 . chapter 2Still a wonderfull story.
I don“t know what version like, is my prefer one.
LOVELY!! |
 Own.Little.World 2008-08-27 . chapter 2I loved the details in Version 2 but...i loved both!! Tee hee! Your a great writer! |
 MythCreatorWriter 2008-08-18 . chapter 1Wow, more romantic inspiration for a Zelda fic.
This relationship was so cute! I love Link's personality here. So adorable! Nice describtion, of the stars and of him. Oh yeah... I really like Zelda's personality too, it so suits her.
But a couple of problems: Ordon didn't exist until Twilight Princess...which happens...hundreds of years later. "Blonde" is for girls; "blond" is for boys. It got a bit dramatic, but mostly it was sweet; it got a bit dramatic when Link was talking about the stars, it seemed rather unlike him.
She hates him, though she loves him...I love that! |
 MalinTheSwede 2008-05-07 . chapter 1This was so good I almost choked on my gum! I LOVED IT:)
Link and Zelda Forever. |
 Prime Ketchum 2008-02-16 . chapter 1Best Link/Zelda Fan Fic Ever ^__^ |
 Lugia Master of the Euphonium 2008-02-12 . chapter 1WOW... now thats a big change, you get to see love from Zelda's point of view, i think this one is my Fav romance story you've written... even though you written so many good ones. There were a few spelling errors, your humanites teacher would be ashamed... but still keep up the good work. Make more like this, the romance stories are very entertaining in the good way. :) |
 Sir Arthur Conan Doyle 2008-01-20 . chapter 1SoSo CUTE! |
 ZeBubba 2007-12-12 . chapter 1I love fluff! You've got some pretty good writing skill to boot as well though. |