Reviews for Something Better Than Chocolate

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lunita- depp 2008-10-06 ch 12,	abuseWow! I ve just finished reading your story and i love it!I love tha kind of romance that they are living! It is a really great story.. please update soon... Bye lunita-depp
Kayla Sparrow 2008-09-24 ch 12,	abuseHave I ever left a review to let you know how wonderful I think your story is? Yes? No? Well, either way, here I am now! :D Oh boy, this story is SO good ! I've discovered it a while back and really liked how you developed the plot. I think the idea is very original and everyone seems to be in character most of the time. I understand the side of Wonka you've decided to bring out and I like it! This last chapter had me wide-eyed with wonder and cheering by the end, it's great! :D Please update soon? I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter after this delightful cliffhanger. Have a nice day! -Kayla
baudelairestitch 2008-09-20 ch 12,	abuseThis is... amazing. It was good before, but now it's just amazing. I loved the car crash, their kiss, the meadow. Everything is written so perfectly, so full of emotion. I can't wait for the next update. n.n
Lizster88 2008-09-16 ch 12,	abuseWow!! Why did you stop frowns to keep us hooked, right?..hehe.. I vote best chapter yet too .. although I really liked their first kiss. Update as soon as u can but keep the chapters long if u can. Hugs --Lizter88
Lizster88 2008-09-16 ch 11,	abuseHi again! I am so sorry I couldn't review on this chapter earlier. My internet goes by space (4GB - gigabytes) and I didn't have anymore space that month so I couldn't review (but i really wanted to). Well, jealousy is so cute on Anne.. willy's admirers ;) ... hope their story ends up well with them together in the end. It would be such a shame if he didn't forgive her in the end... I hope I'm not giving u ideias no don't separate them please, (pouts). I'm about to read the next chapter, then I'll review more... Keep up the good work, u r definitely one of my favourite fanfiction writers. --Lizster88
Johnnydspiratequeen 2008-09-14 ch 12,	abuseAH! I love it so much! Plzz continue!
silverrain1312 2008-09-14 ch 12,	abuseWOW WOW WOW!! I loved it! Not kidding it was the best so far! I wish I could write romance like you. Your scenes are so easy to picture and are so beautiful. I know I put too much fluff into your reviews and I appoligize, but really this was an amazing chapter. Only thing that kind of bothers me is that I forget that we are talking about Willy Wonka. Just saying and I don't think you should change anything. Update soon! ~ari
silverrain1312 2008-08-30 ch 11,	abuseYou updated! Finaly! I have been wanting the chapter for so long! But I totaly understand. school is taking over my life and I hardly get down time. This chapter was really good. You got into some of willy's other emotions that we haven't seen yet. It makes it all the better! Update soon or when ever you can. i won't get mad unless you take a year...but that doesn't mean I wouldn't read it anyway. ~ari
Johnnydspiratequeen 2008-08-29 ch 11,	abuseWhoo! Great chapter, I love the way you decided to dress Willy! hehehe, keep up the good work!
baudelairestitch 2008-08-10 ch 10,	abuseI started reading this story, intending maybe to read the first two chapters or so and then read the rest later, but I seriously just sat here for two hours and read the entire thing from beginning to end without stop. You are a very talented writer, and I love the way you describe Anne's feelings for Willy. I've never read a romance fanfiction that described love so well. I can't wait to see hwo this turns out!
Victoria Blossom 2008-08-04 ch 10,	abuseI really love this story so much! I have to get around to updating mine, as well! Keep up the good work!
Lizster88 2008-07-30 ch 10,	abuseYou gave him a makeover, good ideia. Continue plz --Lizster88
Johnnydspiratequeen 2008-07-27 ch 10,	abuseThe minute I saw the makeover line, I was like E! MAKEOVER WILLY! lol, can't wait till Willy goes shoppin'. He should get himself some ripped up jeans and a couple of regular t-shirts while he's out. That would be hot. XD
ANProductions 2008-07-26 ch 2,	abusecool
xSPUDx 2008-07-23 ch 10,	abuseoh my goodness!what a crazy chapter! it was overall really good though, i must say. there were multiple parts where i found myself shouting at my computer screen again because i was so consumed with what i had just read!! (dont worry, im just weird like that =D ) wonderful work! i am so looking forward to new chapters! i wonder what will happen next, hm... --SPUD !

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