That was well written.

Thank you.

Wow, that was really intense. Loved it.

Talk about intense self loathing...great job :)

Wow... the detail and description you added in so few words, was perfect. I really enjoyed this, and some of your other work!

very well written insight into Jasper's head and his guilt. Liked it!

wow you are really good! i think you did a great job at describing all the emotions! please keep on writing!

This peice is mind blowing. wow... just wow. this has kept me completely speechless. amazing job! i can't even tell you how much i love this! and how many stories you have! so many! you have a true talent. yes, people can write on this site, but you have a gift. thank you for sharing it with everyone. it was a wonderful story! keep writing. :)

I loved seeing how Jasper thought after almost biting Bella!

Powerful.

oh god. depresseing, sad. but amazingly good.

It's a good story. It shows how much Jasper regrets what he'd done and we all know that he'd think everything was all his fault. A little depressing nonetheless, but very good.

Wow, this was an intense story! I think you did a good job though; I feel like Jasper really would hate himself for a while, no matter what everyone else said. Great job!

w-o-w...

this is an excellet one shot.

Its beutiful...

lol

great work!

Horsegal93

I loved this!

oh my. this is a good one-shot. I never seen this point of view and i always wondered. is it possible to go further.. I wonder.. did Jasper ever attempt to apologize? Did he try to talk to Edward or what would Emmette say? Man Im so curious now? Would it be possible for you to go futher with this subject.. make a ring of One-shots with different point of views?